Oh, say can you see by the dawn's early light

Croatian translation: O, vidite li i vi dok sviće zora rana

09:01 Sep 19, 2012
English to Croatian translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
English term or phrase: Oh, say can you see by the dawn's early light
Radi se o prijevodu američke himne, nisam uspjela nigdje naći službeni prijevod, trebaju mi samo prva dva stiha. Otvorena sam za vaše pjesničke prijedloge :-) Zhvaljujem.
Maja Pericic
Croatia
Local time: 22:24
Croatian translation:O, vidite li i vi dok sviće zora rana
Explanation:
mala igra slikama i rimama

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Note added at 33 mins (2012-09-19 09:34:59 GMT)
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s time da se (i vi) komotno može ispustiti :)
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Kolumbina Benčević Tomljanović
Croatia
Local time: 22:24
Grading comment
Hvala vam, jako ste poetični!
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3 +4O, vidite li i vi dok sviće zora rana
Kolumbina Benčević Tomljanović


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25 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +4
oh, say can you see by the dawn's early light
O, vidite li i vi dok sviće zora rana


Explanation:
mala igra slikama i rimama

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Note added at 33 mins (2012-09-19 09:34:59 GMT)
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s time da se (i vi) komotno može ispustiti :)

Kolumbina Benčević Tomljanović
Croatia
Local time: 22:24
Works in field
Native speaker of: Croatian
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
Hvala vam, jako ste poetični!

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Dragomir Kovacevic: jako lepo
19 mins
  -> najljepša hvala, kolega!

agree  sazo
6 hrs
  -> hvala!

agree  dkalinic: Kolegice, ovo ste jako dobro spjevali.
1 day 6 hrs
  -> hvala, kolega! valjda mi je muza bila sklona :)

agree  sandra07
57 days
  -> hvala, kolegice!
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