one man’s message

French translation: un témoignage

22:26 Mar 16, 2016
English to French translations [PRO]
Tech/Engineering - Safety / Programme de sécurité
English term or phrase: one man’s message
Bonjour,

Je travaille actuellement sur un programme de sécurité dans le milieu professionnel.

J'ai un petit souci à traduire l'expression suivante : "a one man’s personal message" dans le contexte suivant :

"After learning about the general behaviors and how they relate to incidents and injuries, we will watch a one man’s personal message on safety. This video will help communicate the importance of personal responsibility..."

Ma version : "...nous visionnerons le discours (d'un homme ?) traitant de la sécurité"

Il me manque quelque chose.
Si vous avez des idées, n'hésitez pas.

Je vous remercie.

Vincent
Vincent Briois
France
Local time: 21:10
French translation:un témoignage
Explanation:
nous verrons le témoignage personnel d'un homme
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3 +6un témoignage
polyglot45
4le discours d'un homme qui traite de la sécurité
marie trad


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16 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +6
un témoignage


Explanation:
nous verrons le témoignage personnel d'un homme

polyglot45
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 8
Notes to answerer
Asker: Tout à fait, "témoignage" est le terme le plus idiomatique dans ce cas, il fallait simplement y penser, merci à vous !


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Chakib Roula: En effet, cette personne parlant de sa propre expérience.
33 mins

agree  Tony M
58 mins

agree  hirselina
1 hr

agree  Premium✍️
5 hrs

agree  Ludovic Roige: Nous visionnerons un témoignage personnel sur la sécurité
13 hrs

agree  Elisabeth Griffin: d'accord pour "témoignage", mais sans personnel, qui fait redondant.
15 hrs
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1 day 11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
le discours d'un homme qui traite de la sécurité


Explanation:
une idée...

marie trad
Local time: 21:10
Native speaker of: French
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