Proofreading one sentence from English to Malay

Malay translation: Pameran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik

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English term or phrase:Proofreading one sentence from English to Malay
Malay translation:Pameran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik
Entered by: yam2u

03:54 Feb 11, 2007
English to Malay translations [Non-PRO]
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English term or phrase: Proofreading one sentence from English to Malay
Dear all

Is the following sentence correctly translated?

The 2nd ANGVA Natural Gas Vehicle Exhibition and Conference for Asia Pacific

= Pamiran dan Konferen Kenderaan yang menguna Gas ANGVA di Asia Pacific yang ke II

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TJ (Sajja)
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Sajja Taemsamrn (TJ)
Thailand
Local time: 19:32
Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik
Explanation:
The translation has many inaccuracies. Below are corrected versions:

1) Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik

2) Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA Kedua bagi Asia Pasifik

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Note added at 1 day2 hrs (2007-02-12 06:40:39 GMT) Post-grading
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Correction:

"Pamiran" should be "Pameran".

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5 +1Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik
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The 2nd ANGVA Natural Gas Vehicle Exhibition and Conference for Asia Pacific
Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik


Explanation:
The translation has many inaccuracies. Below are corrected versions:

1) Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA KeII bagi Asia Pasifik

2) Pamiran dan Persidangan Kenderaan Gas Asli ANGVA Kedua bagi Asia Pasifik

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Note added at 1 day2 hrs (2007-02-12 06:40:39 GMT) Post-grading
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Correction:

"Pamiran" should be "Pameran".



yam2u
United States
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