seen in

Malay translation: kelihatan; dilihat; memperlihatkan/dilihat

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English term or phrase:seen in
Malay translation:kelihatan; dilihat; memperlihatkan/dilihat
Entered by: yam2u

06:51 Aug 30, 2007
English to Malay translations [PRO]
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English term or phrase: seen in
Descriptive text:

"From the air, mountain ranges, no longer *seen in* profile, dwarf to anthills. But rivers, which from the ground one usually *sees in* cross-sections, stretch out serenely ahead as far as the eye can reach. Rivers are *seen in* their true stature."

My attempt:
....banjaran2 gunung, tidak lagi kenampakan profilnya, kini/menjadi sekecil/seperti busut. Tetapi sungai, yang di bumi biasanya ?dilihat/kelihatan? hanya keratan rentasnya, ..etc....

boleh tak?

Dan ayat yang last sekali-- perkataan apa yang paling cocok bagi *seen in* ?

Terima kasih atas bantuan!
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United Arab Emirates
Local time: 09:19
kelihatan; dilihat; memperlihatkan/dilihat
Explanation:
"From the air, mountain ranges, no longer *seen in* profile, dwarf to anthills. But rivers, which from the ground one usually *sees in* cross-sections, stretch out serenely ahead as far as the eye can reach. Rivers are *seen in* their true stature."

Here are two possibilities [relevant words in BOLD]:

1) "Daripada udara, banjaran gunung mengecil menjadi busut apabila tidak lagi KELIHATAN dari sudut profil/tepi. Tetapi sungai yang biasanya DILIHAT dari sudut keratan lintang membentang hening sejauh mata memandang. Sungai MEMPERLIHATKAN kehebatan sebenarnya.

2) "Daripada udara, banjaran gunung nampak kemetot umpama busut apabila tidak lagi KELIHATAN dari sudut tepi. Namun sungai yang biasanya DILIHAT dari sudut keratan lintang tenang terhulur sejauh mata memandang. Kehebatan sebenar sungai dapat DILIHAT.

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Note added at 2 days23 hrs (2007-09-02 06:31:43 GMT)
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Sorry, pls insert "di bumi" between:

biasanya DILIHAT *di bumi* dari sudut keratan lintang
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yam2u
United States
Grading comment
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. What else can I say. I'm going for #1-- it's structurally closer. Thank you SO much!
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Summary of answers provided
3 +1dapat dilihat
hazlinda76
4kelihatan; dilihat; memperlihatkan/dilihat
yam2u
3nyatalagi?
Aniza Borhan


  

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11 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
nyatalagi?


Explanation:
In the sentence, this may fit if you try put it. Since you are describing about the gunung yang profil dia dah tade macam gunung lagi, dak?

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Note added at 11 hrs (2007-08-30 18:07:57 GMT)
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suppose to spell nyata lagi.. my keyboard a little "wenk" dah malam ni..

Aniza Borhan
Malaysia
Local time: 13:19
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in MalayMalay
Notes to answerer
Asker: Aniza, nyata is *just* the word I need for the final sentence-- ribuan terima kasih! Tapi imo tak berapa fit dalam ayat#2. I think I will wait for more suggestions for ayat#1. Thanks!

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21 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
dapat dilihat


Explanation:
My attempt for the final sentence:

Sungat dapat dilihat dalam bentuk asalnya.

hazlinda76
Malaysia
Local time: 13:19
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in MalayMalay
PRO pts in category: 3
Notes to answerer
Asker: ma'af Hazlinda tapi "true stature" di sini bukan bermakna " bentuk asal". Saya rasa perkataan "nyata" itu lebih tepat. I've decided to translate the final sentence thus: "Ternyatalah kini keagungannya." I think this is more true to style & fits the mood of the passage. Still, thank you for your input! Now I still need suggestions untuk ayat kedua.........


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agree  Kaliamma Ponnan
37 mins
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2 days 23 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
kelihatan; dilihat; memperlihatkan/dilihat


Explanation:
"From the air, mountain ranges, no longer *seen in* profile, dwarf to anthills. But rivers, which from the ground one usually *sees in* cross-sections, stretch out serenely ahead as far as the eye can reach. Rivers are *seen in* their true stature."

Here are two possibilities [relevant words in BOLD]:

1) "Daripada udara, banjaran gunung mengecil menjadi busut apabila tidak lagi KELIHATAN dari sudut profil/tepi. Tetapi sungai yang biasanya DILIHAT dari sudut keratan lintang membentang hening sejauh mata memandang. Sungai MEMPERLIHATKAN kehebatan sebenarnya.

2) "Daripada udara, banjaran gunung nampak kemetot umpama busut apabila tidak lagi KELIHATAN dari sudut tepi. Namun sungai yang biasanya DILIHAT dari sudut keratan lintang tenang terhulur sejauh mata memandang. Kehebatan sebenar sungai dapat DILIHAT.

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Note added at 2 days23 hrs (2007-09-02 06:31:43 GMT)
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Sorry, pls insert "di bumi" between:

biasanya DILIHAT *di bumi* dari sudut keratan lintang

yam2u
United States
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in MalayMalay, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 68
Grading comment
B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L. What else can I say. I'm going for #1-- it's structurally closer. Thank you SO much!
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