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5 | It is ok |
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4 | a cluster (of services) that includes the new support pack changes |
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new support pack cluster It is ok Explanation: It is ok as it is. the word order is correct. If you changed it you could change the intended meaning for the way it is structured. New support Cluster pack: would indicate the pack has the clusters inside the pack. New support pack cluster: says the pack has several clusters attached/branching out from it -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2009-01-19 08:15:35 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- The word "IF" you are....... and then there is this sentence... "then upgrade all cluster nodes to SP2 before any of them reboot." this looks like there is a set process and it could be that there are several packs in the cluster or cluster packs branching out from a main pack. Example: http://english.ttu.edu/kairos/3.1/news/paradigm/wren.gif there is a link here from microsoft http://technet.microsoft.com/en-us/library/cc720109.aspx This is a difficult question as the pack creators, would be the only ones who would know. |
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new support pack cluster a cluster (of services) that includes the new support pack changes Explanation: A indicated in the first sentence of your text: "If you are installing an entirely new cluster that includes these Support Pack changes..." -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 hrs (2009-01-19 10:50:49 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Sorry, that should be *installing a new cluster that includes the support pack changes* -- as opposed, for example, to installing a new cluster and then installing the support pack changes, or installing the support pack changes in an existing cluster. |
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