damp of hell, serenity of heaven

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11:53 May 22, 2019
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Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
English term or phrase: damp of hell, serenity of heaven
Despair is the damp of hell, as joy is the serenity of heaven
Yaprak Aydin
Türkiye
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Explanation:
John Donne makes a play on two archaic meanings of the word damp i.e. mist or fog, and depression or dejection.

He also wrote: "Yet there is a damp or a cloud of uncharitableness."
Merriam-Webster Dictionary

So the text conveys the idea that despair/depression/dejection pervades Hell like a fog, just as Heaven is pervaded by joyful tranquility.

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Also OED page 231

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Cf. Their heartes were stricken into a great dampe (...) G. WOODCOCKE 1606
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4 +3[see my explanation]
philgoddard
3 +3see explanation
Mark Robertson
3sadness of hell/of a difficul place, calmness of heaven/place of hapiness
Juan Arturo Blackmore Zerón
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Damp has an older meaning of gas, rather than wetness
B D Finch

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[see my explanation]


Explanation:
The quote is from the poet John Donne.

I'm pretty sure damp is a reference to toxic, flammable gases that sometimes cause explosions in mines. The idea is "gas that fuels the fires of hell".
http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Damp_(mining)

The second part means "joy is what makes heaven such a serene place". Serene means calm, relaxed, and happy.

philgoddard
United States
Native speaker of: English
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Andrea Pilenso
13 mins

agree  Clauwolf
26 mins

agree  B D Finch: Well done! Yes, "damp" must be flammable gas, not wetness here, as hell is definitely associated with fire, rather than water.
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see explanation


Explanation:
John Donne makes a play on two archaic meanings of the word damp i.e. mist or fog, and depression or dejection.

He also wrote: "Yet there is a damp or a cloud of uncharitableness."
Merriam-Webster Dictionary

So the text conveys the idea that despair/depression/dejection pervades Hell like a fog, just as Heaven is pervaded by joyful tranquility.

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Note added at 1 hr (2019-05-22 13:48:00 GMT)
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Also OED page 231

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Note added at 2 hrs (2019-05-22 14:39:47 GMT)
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Cf. Their heartes were stricken into a great dampe (...) G. WOODCOCKE 1606

Mark Robertson
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agree  Tina Vonhof (X)
1 hr
  -> Thank you

agree  B D Finch: I agree with the archaic meaning of "dejection" (which might have survived, with a vowel change, as "down in the dumps"), but I think it is also flammable or poisonous gas; not mist or fog, which might offer some relief from hellfire.
4 hrs
  -> Thanks. Have you any idea where this quote comes from? I would like to read the whole piece and have been looking quite assiduously but can find nothing.

agree  Charles Davis
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sadness of hell/of a difficul place, calmness of heaven/place of hapiness


Explanation:
To extinguish/discouragement/dejection: to damp a fire.

Juan Arturo Blackmore Zerón
Mexico
Local time: 04:18
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Native speaker of: Spanish
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Reference comments


6 hrs
Reference: Damp has an older meaning of gas, rather than wetness

Reference information:
"Blackdamp (also known as stythe or choke damp) is an asphyxiant, reducing the available oxygen content of air to a level incapable of sustaining human or animal life. ... The word damp is used in similar mining terms such as white damp (carbon monoxide), fire damp (typically methane) and stink damp (hydrogen sulfide)."

That makes sense here, because hell was associated with fire, not water.


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"damp (n.)

early 14c., "noxious vapor in a coal mine, fire-damp, stifling poisonous gas," perhaps in Old English but there is no record of it. If not, probably from Middle Low German damp; ultimately in either case from Proto-Germanic *dampaz (source also of Old High German damph, German Dampf "vapor;" Old Norse dampi "dust"). Sense of "moist air, moisture, humidity" is not easily distinguished from the older sense but is certainly attested by 1706."
https://www.etymonline.com/word/damp


    https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blackdamp
B D Finch
France
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
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neutral  Mark Robertson: Three of the four types of mining damp you refer to i.e. black damp, white damp and stink damp, have no association with fire.
15 hrs
  -> That's right, but they do show that the current meaning of damp doesn't apply as the original meaning covered any noxious gas.
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