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English language (monolingual) [Non-PRO] Poetry & Literature / grammar | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Yvonne Gallagher Ireland Local time: 03:48 | ||||||
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i was walking..., see Explanation: Yes, it looks awkward WHERE is he/she walking? Through a field? some suggestions Simply: I was walking through knee-high grass OR the tall grass was brushing against my knees as I walked I was walking along (or through a field) with tall grass brushing against my knees -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2020-09-13 11:14:32 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- It would be easier to tweak if you gave more context and the surrounding text -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 11 days (2020-09-24 23:18:04 GMT) Post-grading -------------------------------------------------- Glad to have helped |
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