De la tête, émerge, par en haut,

English translation: out of / from the top of the head (there) emerges

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French term or phrase:de la tête, émerge, par en haut,
English translation:out of / from the top of the head (there) emerges
Entered by: Tony M

20:24 Jun 17, 2017
French to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Archaeology / ancient art
French term or phrase: De la tête, émerge, par en haut,
Hi again!
DOC: 1907 Museum catalog of ancient Egyptian mirrors. Catalog entry.
CONTEXT: 44089. Pièce de chapiteau de manche de miroir. - Or, argent, quartz et pâtes d'incrustation. Elle représente une double tête d'Hâthor à oreilles de vache. [....] ***De la tête,*** encore garnie de son mastic, émerge, ***par en haut,*** un morceau de métal scorifié et complètement informe; c'est la tige du disque, enveloppée encore d'une substance très friable qui est aussi du mastic maculé par l'oxydation de la pièce de métal avec laquelle il était en contact. Du côté opposé, à la section du menton, on voit encore, engagé dans la douille, ici presque carrée, l'extrémité de la tige qui paraît être en argent et de chaque côté des débris ligneux qui sont les deux lamelles ou dents du tenon aménagé au sommet de la poignée, entre lesquelles venait s'engager la tige.
PICTURE: https://books.google.com/books?id=R7BDAAAAYAAJ&lpg=PA45&ots=... TOP LEFT CORNER
ATTEMPT: From the head, still filled with its mastic, emerges, from above/the top, a piece of metal corroded and totally shapeless;
ISSUE: Isn't this redundant.
Thanks in advance for your thoughts!
angela3thomas
United States
out of / from the top of the head (there) emerges
Explanation:
No it's not redundant — it could easily emerge, for example, from the BACK of the head!

But it reads a lot more smoothly in EN if you get right away from the FR word order.
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Tony M
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de la tête, émerge, par en haut,
out of / from the top of the head (there) emerges


Explanation:
No it's not redundant — it could easily emerge, for example, from the BACK of the head!

But it reads a lot more smoothly in EN if you get right away from the FR word order.

Tony M
France
Local time: 12:39
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 96
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Thank you!

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