rester dans le combat de la distribution

English translation: in the competitive world of retail

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French term or phrase:rester dans le combat de la distribution
English translation:in the competitive world of retail
Entered by: Wendy Cummings

09:17 Nov 5, 2010
French to English translations [PRO]
Marketing - Food & Drink
French term or phrase: rester dans le combat de la distribution
"Letter" in a marketing brochure from the Director of a small company that produces organic fruit juices:

Continuons à œuvrer pour que nos magasins d’alimentation biologique restent dans le combat de la distribution, le lieu où nos consommateurs trouveront la meilleure réponse à leurs besoins.

Thanks in advance.
Wendy Cummings
United Kingdom
Local time: 04:50
in the competitive world of retail
Explanation:
I think you might be parsing this incorrectly. There should be a comma, "nos magasins restent, dans le combat de la distribution, le lieu..."

The idea is that as far as food retail is concerned organic stores provide what consumers are looking for.

My suggestion may not be the best way to render this. It's more to give you an idea of what is meant.
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Emma Paulay
France
Local time: 05:50
Grading comment
Thanks Emma.
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4 +4in the competitive world of retail
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in the competitive world of retail


Explanation:
I think you might be parsing this incorrectly. There should be a comma, "nos magasins restent, dans le combat de la distribution, le lieu..."

The idea is that as far as food retail is concerned organic stores provide what consumers are looking for.

My suggestion may not be the best way to render this. It's more to give you an idea of what is meant.

Emma Paulay
France
Local time: 05:50
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 12
Grading comment
Thanks Emma.
Notes to answerer
Asker: I *knew* there'd be a simple answer staring me in the face! Oh the poor little neglected comma, how I miss thee!


Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Evans (X): I think you are absolutely right
16 mins

agree  mimi 254
23 mins

agree  Cristina Talavera: yes. ...fight to maintain the market share of the specialty stores
2 hrs

agree  Sandra Petch: Well spotted! An "Eats, Shoots and Leaves" moment...
2 hrs
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