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Attraverso la mobilità,

English translation: [See my suggestion for the whole sentence]

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Italian term or phrase:Attraverso la mobilità,
English translation:[See my suggestion for the whole sentence]
Entered by: Lara Barnett

07:34 Dec 13, 2019
Italian to English translations [PRO]
Bus/Financial - General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters / Smart mobility
Italian term or phrase: Attraverso la mobilità,
La mobilità è, senza alcun dubbio, uno dei driver del processo di crescita di un territorio. Attraverso la mobilità, il territorio e la comunità di attori che ad esso sono interessati ne realizzano la piena possibilità di fruizione.

I have put:

"Through mobility, the nation and the community of key players with an interest in this, can develop its potential to full fruition. "

Something is missing due to the use of "through", so I think this is the part I have misunderstood.
Lara Barnett
United Kingdom
Local time: 11:32
[See my suggestion for the whole sentence]
Explanation:
I don't think you should repeat "mobility" as the Italian does, or stay so close to the original. I suggest something like

It enables the region/nation and its community of stakeholders to achieve their full potential.
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philgoddard
United States
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4 +1[See my suggestion for the whole sentence]
philgoddard
4[reword the whole sentence]
Wolf Draeger


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1 hr   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
[See my suggestion for the whole sentence]


Explanation:
I don't think you should repeat "mobility" as the Italian does, or stay so close to the original. I suggest something like

It enables the region/nation and its community of stakeholders to achieve their full potential.

philgoddard
United States
Meets criteria
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 186

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Wolf Draeger: Right approach, though I'd avoid the much-abused "stakeholders" if possible (attori like acteurs can be a pain).
37 mins
  -> I hated stakeholders at first, but it filled a gap in the language :-)
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4 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
[reword the whole sentence]


Explanation:
Another rendering; as Phil says in his answer, there's no need to repeat mobilità in the next sentence.

As I suspect with their French counterparts, territorio and attori do not always translate cleanly into English, so it may be more practical to sidestep them altogether while retaining the gist.

Example sentence(s):
  • It creates vast opportunities for people to make the most of the spaces they live and work in.
  • It creates opportunities for people to enjoy the spaces they live and work in to the full.
Wolf Draeger
South Africa
Local time: 12:32
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