00:15 Dec 13, 2013 |
Japanese to English translations [Non-PRO] Games / Video Games / Gaming / Casino | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Kurt Hammond United States Local time: 04:19 | ||||||
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3 +3 | I'll give you a present just once, within XXX hours from starting the game! |
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I'll give you a present just once, within XXX hours from starting the game! Explanation: It's pretty awkward even in the Japanese, I suspect that it will be impossible to make this entirely natural-sounding. Sort of like any type of advertisement or training material that has two actors engaged in a fake conversation. To break it down, I think you can basically choose any phrasing yo want, so long as includes these key points: Player can get a present This is possible only within XXX hours from starting (to play) the game It is a special or limited one-time opportunity |
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