Desenvolvimento com Inclusão pelo Direito e pela Renda

English translation: devlopment with inclusion upon the guarantee of rights and income

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Portuguese term or phrase: Desenvolvimento com Inclusão pelo Direito e pela Renda
English translation:devlopment with inclusion upon the guarantee of rights and income
Entered by: Mario Freitas

22:38 Mar 22, 2014
Portuguese to English translations [PRO]
Social Sciences - Government / Politics / Social inclusion
Portuguese term or phrase: Desenvolvimento com Inclusão pelo Direito e pela Renda
This is the title of a program in Sergipe (Brazil). I need something catchy, and I'm not sure if "Direito" refers to law or rights. My first attempt is: 'Development with Inclusion through Rights and Returns'

"Essa nova perspectiva de desenvolvimento econômico com inclusão social foi iniciada em 2008, a partir do Plano Plurianual 2008-2011 - Desenvolvimento com Inclusão pelo Direito e pela Renda, com iniciativas baseadas em um novo modelo de desenvolvimento voltado para a redução da exclusão social e das desigualdades sociais e regionais."
Muriel Vasconcellos
United States
Local time: 01:41
devlopment with inclusion upon the guarantee of rights and income
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Mario Freitas
Brazil
Local time: 05:41
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I'm going to go with :
'Development with Inclusion: Guaranteeing Rights and Income'
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Summary of answers provided
4Inclusion Development by Rights and Income
Raquel Santos
4Inclusion Programme for the Development of Rights and Income
Richard Purdom
3devlopment with inclusion upon the guarantee of rights and income
Mario Freitas
3Economic Development and Social Inclusion through Rights and Income
T o b i a s
3Inclusion Programme for Progess on Rights and Wages
Richard Purdom
3Development with Inclusion through Rights and Income
Rachel Fell


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devlopment with inclusion upon the guarantee of rights and income


Explanation:
Suggestion

Mario Freitas
Brazil
Local time: 05:41
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PRO pts in category: 120
Grading comment
I'm going to go with :
'Development with Inclusion: Guaranteeing Rights and Income'

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Richard Purdom: 'upon'? there is also no 'guarantee', so it's 'a' not 'the'
13 hrs
  -> Upon meaning "by means of" or "under". Exactly, there is no guarantee. So If there is, or upon guarantee...
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Inclusion Programme for the Development of Rights and Income


Explanation:
suggestion

Richard Purdom
Portugal
Local time: 09:41
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8
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14 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Economic Development and Social Inclusion through Rights and Income


Explanation:
Don’t see how you can do ‘catchy’ here unless you altogether bag translation per se and give the program some name that’s, well, catchy. If you are going to make it shorter (read catchy) I would go with Development and Inclusion and explain it elsewhere.



T o b i a s
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 24

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Donna Sandin: to me, this sounds the best in English and it's "catchier" - I think pelo direito means "under the law" but you can get there by using "rights" in the way thta Tobias did
49 mins

disagree  Raquel Santos: Too long and "Economic" it's an addition to the original slogan.
7 hrs
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23 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Inclusion Programme for Progess on Rights and Wages


Explanation:
just another suggestion :-)

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Note added at 23 hrs (2014-03-23 21:49:02 GMT)
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Programme/project/policy/program ...

Richard Purdom
Portugal
Local time: 09:41
Native speaker of: English
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1 day 2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
Desenvolvimento com Inclusão pelo Direito e pela Renda
Development with Inclusion through Rights and Income


Explanation:

Document of The World Bank FOR OFFICIAL USE ONLY Report No ...
www-wds.worldbank.org/.../723500PGD0P129010Box374388B00OUO...‎

30 Apr 2013 - 50 ANNEX 2: SERGIPE DEVELOPMENT THROUGH INCLUSION ...... with Inclusion through Rights and Income, under which efforts were...

In the State of Sergipe, the first initiatives based on this new development
paradigm date from the 2008-2011 Multiyear Plan – Development with Inclusion through Rights and Income, under which efforts were already under way to
implement “a new development model for the reduction of social exclusion and
social and regional inequalities.






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Note added at 1 day2 hrs (2014-03-24 01:21:43 GMT)
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neater (usable) link to the doc.: http://tinyurl.com/pf3rhra

Rachel Fell
United Kingdom
Local time: 09:41
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 4
Notes to answerer
Asker: Hi Rachel, Indeed, this looks pretty official. I suppose I should use this, though it doesn't seem very clear to me.

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