brindou com sua presença

English translation: given the privilege of

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Portuguese term or phrase:brindou com sua presença
English translation:given the privilege of
Entered by: Bett

14:01 Mar 21, 2016
Portuguese to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Journalism / conversation
Portuguese term or phrase: brindou com sua presença
this is part of a transcript of a eulogy for a prominent member of a group.

"... Fulana brindou com sua presença vários pesquisadores com suas contribuições em bancas de qualificação e defesas de mestrado e doutorado..."


I am thinking "honoured / graced with her presence", but this reminds me of the Queen, so I believe it is a bit too much, isn't it?
any suggestions appreciated...
Bett
Local time: 02:10
given the privilege of
Explanation:
I would write the phrase like this...

Several researchers were given the privilege of her (Fulana´s) contributions...

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Note added at 3 hrs (2016-03-21 17:26:07 GMT)
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or "had the privilege of..."
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Kim Edwards-Buarque
Spain
Local time: 06:10
Grading comment
Thank you! this fits best
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1given the privilege of
Kim Edwards-Buarque
3 +1was instrumental among (several researchers with her contributions)
Ana Vozone
4benefited from her highly esteemed contributions
Matheus Chaud
4...has captivated many students/researchers
Lara Barnett
4visited [the group of researchers ...] and graciously) shared [... her contributions]]
Muriel Vasconcellos
3graced with her presence
T o b i a s
2attracted
Robert Forstag


Discussion entries: 7





  

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attracted


Explanation:
This seems to be the meaning: her presence (because of her prominence in the field) attracted graduate students to enroll in the program in question (for this seems to be the context).

Robert Forstag
United States
Local time: 01:10
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Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 4
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19 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
was instrumental among (several researchers with her contributions)


Explanation:
Another suggestion.

or
... had an instrumental presence / role among...


Example sentence(s):
  • Babu was instrumental among a cadre of activists who charted a path from Islamic modernism to Pan-Africanism and Third World Marxism.
  • The younger Gamsakhurdia was instrumental among a group of young men and women who, beginning in the late 1960s, spearheaded a religious-national
Ana Vozone
Local time: 06:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 16

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Andre Dumoulin
33 mins
  -> Thank you, Andre!

neutral  Lara Barnett: But this is incorrect usage of "instrumental to" - the references do not seem to relate to your proposed answer as the usage is completely different. You would normally say "instrumental to... (e.g. to an event which eventually came to fruition.)
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benefited from her highly esteemed contributions


Explanation:
Eu mudaria um pouco a estrutura da frase e usaria benefited e highly esteemed contributions (or highly appreciated contributions):


Fulana brindou com sua presença vários pesquisadores com suas contribuições em bancas de qualificação e defesas de mestrado e doutorado

Several researchers have benefited from her highly esteemed contributions (or highly appreciated contributions)...

Matheus Chaud
Brazil
Local time: 02:10
Native speaker of: Native in PortuguesePortuguese
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Danielle Soler
50 mins
  -> Thanks, Danielle!

disagree  Richard Purdom: nobody said anything was highly esteemed, or appreciated: in answering your comment, your answer says that her contributions were highly esteemed, not her presence. And, look at the text in the db, looks like the text in the question is wrong anyway.
1 hr
  -> If you don't like it, just change it to Several researchers have benefited from her highly esteemed presence and contributions (which is the same thing, by the way: probably her presence is esteemed exactly because of her contributions).
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3 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
given the privilege of


Explanation:
I would write the phrase like this...

Several researchers were given the privilege of her (Fulana´s) contributions...

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Note added at 3 hrs (2016-03-21 17:26:07 GMT)
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or "had the privilege of..."

Kim Edwards-Buarque
Spain
Local time: 06:10
Works in field
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 8
Grading comment
Thank you! this fits best

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Richard Purdom: or 'enjoyed the privilege'
2 hrs
  -> Thank you Richard!
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...has captivated many students/researchers


Explanation:
"Fulana has captivated many students/researchers through her contributions..." etc....

I still see the problem (for the English) with attributing "com" twice to the same verb: i.e.
"...with her presence / with her contributions"
"...com sua presença / com suas contribuições "

Lara Barnett
United Kingdom
Local time: 06:10
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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visited [the group of researchers ...] and graciously) shared [... her contributions]]


Explanation:
Turn it around and break it up:

She visited the group of researchers ... and graciously shared her contributions.

Muriel Vasconcellos
United States
Local time: 22:10
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8
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graced with her presence


Explanation:
I prefer Bett’s original suggestion. The text is a bit over the top, so I don’t think it matters a bit if it “sounds like the Queen.”

e brindou com sua presença vários pesquisadores com suas contribuições em bancas de qualificação e defesas de mestrado e doutorado
and graced several researchers with her presence and contributions at master’s and PhD dissertation defense committee
(attempt to detangle)

c.f.:
She was a wonderful teacher; we were lucky to have been graced with her presence here at Country Day.
http://lcdskatemiller.blogspot.com/2011/11/rudy-sharpe-head-...

We believe that all that portion of Florida that has been graced with her presence in the past will be graced with it again;
Annual Meeting of the Florida State Horticultural Society, Volume 14
By Florida State Horticultural Society. 1901.

Hedda sees her as her arch rival [sic] and is very jealous of Thea. Hedda is the one who destroys everything that has been graced with her presence. She is unable to create anything in a positive manner.
http://essaymonster.net/english/26872-dramatic-significance-...




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Note added at 2 days9 hrs (2016-03-23 23:05:28 GMT)
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'committees', not 'committee'

T o b i a s
Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish
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