tremura ciorba in farfurii

English translation: sent ripples through the (bowls of) soup / the soup rippled in the bowls

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Romanian term or phrase:tremura ciorba in farfurii
English translation:sent ripples through the (bowls of) soup / the soup rippled in the bowls
Entered by: Lara Barnett

05:10 Sep 5, 2016
Romanian to English translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature
Romanian term or phrase: tremura ciorba in farfurii
Cand il striga tremura ciorba in farfurii si caii ciuleau urechile in grajduri.

In afara de "the soup was trembling..." nu am nicio idee.
Adela Porumbel
Romania
Local time: 07:17
sent ripples through the (bowls of) soup / the soup rippled in the bowls
Explanation:
When we talk of water being disturbed by either sound or physical vibrations, we often use the term "ripples"or "to ripple" (noun and verb respectively).

"Ripple
verb (used without object), rippled, rippling.

1. (of a liquid surface) to form small waves or undulations, as water agitated by a breeze.
2. to flow with a light rise and fall or ruffling of the surface.
3. (of a solid surface) to form or have small undulations, ruffles, or folds.
4. (of sound) to undulate or rise and fall in tone, inflection, or magnitude.
verb (used with object), rippled, rippling.
5. to form small waves or undulations on; agitate lightly.
6. to mark as if with ripples; give a wavy form to.
noun
7. a small wave or undulation, as on water.
8. any similar movement or appearance; a small undulation or wave, as in hair.
9. a small rapid.
10. Geology. ripple mark.
11. a sound, as of water flowing in ripples:
a ripple of laughter."

Noun is obviously used to convey the same idea.
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Lara Barnett
United Kingdom
Local time: 05:17
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Summary of answers provided
5it created waves in the soup
Emil Niculescu
5the soup trembled in plates
Sandra & Kenneth Grossman
4the soup churned in the plates
adami
4sent the soup shaking/quivering in the bowls
Annamaria Amik
4sent ripples through the (bowls of) soup / the soup rippled in the bowls
Lara Barnett


Discussion entries: 7





  

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23 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5
it created waves in the soup


Explanation:
This is not only scientifically accurate but somehow it manages to be also a most poetic solution. I would also offer these possibilities:
* the sound creased the surface of the thick soup
* the soup revolted
* a storm began in the soup

Emil Niculescu
United States
Local time: 21:17
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Native speaker of: Native in RomanianRomanian, Native in EnglishEnglish
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Asker: "creased the surface of the soup", "waves in the soup"... poetic indeed, I love your solutions. Many thanks!

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the soup churned in the plates


Explanation:
One thing: if it's a story from a time earlier than the 20th century, don't use modern words like "create" or "wave", they will be anachronic (except in a scientific context).

adami
Romania
Local time: 07:17
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the soup trembled in plates


Explanation:
Chiar așa. În plus, traducerea literală conferă nu numai sensul de vibrație sonoră, ci și cel de teamă sau respect, dacă e cazul.
Mult mai sugestiv.

Sandra & Kenneth Grossman
Israel
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sent the soup shaking/quivering in the bowls


Explanation:
When he shouted his name, it sent the ...

Cred că bowl e mai uzual pentru supe şi ciorbe în lumea anglofonă.

Annamaria Amik
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sent ripples through the (bowls of) soup / the soup rippled in the bowls


Explanation:
When we talk of water being disturbed by either sound or physical vibrations, we often use the term "ripples"or "to ripple" (noun and verb respectively).

"Ripple
verb (used without object), rippled, rippling.

1. (of a liquid surface) to form small waves or undulations, as water agitated by a breeze.
2. to flow with a light rise and fall or ruffling of the surface.
3. (of a solid surface) to form or have small undulations, ruffles, or folds.
4. (of sound) to undulate or rise and fall in tone, inflection, or magnitude.
verb (used with object), rippled, rippling.
5. to form small waves or undulations on; agitate lightly.
6. to mark as if with ripples; give a wavy form to.
noun
7. a small wave or undulation, as on water.
8. any similar movement or appearance; a small undulation or wave, as in hair.
9. a small rapid.
10. Geology. ripple mark.
11. a sound, as of water flowing in ripples:
a ripple of laughter."

Noun is obviously used to convey the same idea.

Example sentence(s):
  • "Alex scoffs, but the act sends him into a blessedly-short-lived coughing fit seconds later, shaking the food tray and sending ripples through the soup and water."
  • "A male alligator.....lets out a low rumbling roar. The sound SENDS RIPPLES THROUGH THE WATER. All around the swamp, other alligators respond with roars of their own." (Page 4)

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    https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=o6KLCwAAQBAJ&printsec=frontcover#v=onepage&q=ripples&f=false
Lara Barnett
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Thanks to all involved!
Notes to answerer
Asker: Thank you, Lara, I used bowls.

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