12:02 Apr 26, 2009 |
Russian to English translations [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Manufacturing | |||||||
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carries out separate production cycles of the abovementioned products Explanation: - |
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is involved in completion of the distinct production cycles mentioned above Explanation: ... -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 9 hrs (2009-04-26 21:54:39 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- "production... of products" is totally unnecessary. Water is watery. Whatever is produced is a product of the process of production whereby it is produced... etc,etc, etc. |
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X also performs individual cycles involved in the production of the above products Explanation: - -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 days1 hr (2009-04-28 13:16:32 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Хочу заметить, что в английском отношение к конструкциям типа the user uses, production of the products другое, чем в русском. Стилистически такие структуры считаются нейтральными. Привожу ниже фрагмент из замечательнейшей книги Бориса Климзо "Ремесло технического переводчика". "Тавтология Русские стилисты требуют править предложения, содержащие однокоренные слова [...] Нормы английского языка в этом отношении менее строги. Более того, некоторые английские стилисты даже называют запрещение повторять слова "стилистическим пугалом". И действительно, в технической литературе использование в одном предложении однокоренных слов - обычное явление: Even with the greater length, the leakage requirements still required close clearances so that rubbing had to be anticipated. Heavy metals are typical types of pollutants that are..." Б.Н.Климзо. Ремесло технического переводчика. Москва - Р.Валент, 2006., с.164 -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 2 days1 hr (2009-04-28 13:19:31 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- BTW, production of the products yields 107,000 google hits. |
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