15:10 Apr 16, 2009 |
Russian to German translations [PRO] Cosmetics, Beauty / Nagelform „Edge“ von Valentina Denisenko | |||||||
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s.u. Explanation: Die unreife Idee stellte den gegen sich selbst anspruchsvollen Meister nicht zufrieden. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 Stunden (2009-04-16 18:28:00 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Можно громоздкую конструкцию «gegen sich selbst anspruchsvoll» заменить «selbstkritisch» Die unreife Idee stellte den selbstkritischen Meister nicht zufrieden -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 3 Stunden (2009-04-16 18:35:41 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Не знаю, насколько это "красиво", но близко к исходному тексту. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 4 Stunden (2009-04-16 19:18:43 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Здесь можно «обыграть» слова- Gedanke, Entwurf- der unvollkommene Entwurf |
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