a dal'she nam pridyotsa vybirat': udirat' ili umirat'.

01:57 Dec 29, 2009
Russian to Italian translations [PRO]
Art/Literary - Poetry & Literature / poetry
Russian term or phrase: a dal'she nam pridyotsa vybirat': udirat' ili umirat'.
Come sarebbe meglio di tradurre la frase poetica in italiano cercando di preservare lo stile?
Sara' la versione " e poi, dovremo dire: fuggire o morire" accettabile? Grazie. Ivan Petryshyn
Ivan Petryshyn


Summary of answers provided
4 +1sparire o perire
Natalya Vinkler
4 +1e poi la scelta ci sarà chiarita: dar alle gambe oppure dar la vita
Michael Korovkin
3 +1fuggire o morire
Federica Della Casa Marchi
3 +1E poi, ahinoi, dovremo affrontare/La dura scelta: scappare o crepare.
Assiolo
4e poi si dovrà scegliere: fuggire o morire.
Luisella Denti
3e poi non ci resterà che scegliere: fuggire o morire
Caterina De Santis
3scappare o crepare
solod


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8 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
sparire o perire


Explanation:
E poi dovremo scegliere, se sparire o perire. Один из вариантов, по-моему, довольно созвучные слова, смысл они тоже передают. Остальные синонимы не так-то легко сопоставляются.

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Note added at 8 hrs (2009-12-29 10:36:11 GMT)
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Тем более, значение perire - это погибнуть, в особенности на поле боя. Если я правильно поняла, это Ваш случай?

Natalya Vinkler
Italy
Local time: 18:01
Native speaker of: Russian
PRO pts in category: 8

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agree  Karin Anna Aisicovich
10 hrs
  -> Grazie Karin
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9 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
fuggire o morire


Explanation:
visto il contesto quasi inesistente, io lascerei come hai proposto tu, cioè:
"e poi dovremo scegliere, se fuggire o morire"



Federica Della Casa Marchi
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agree  Minuetta: concordo
6 hrs
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e poi non ci resterà che scegliere: fuggire o morire


Explanation:
.

Caterina De Santis
Italy
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16 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
e poi la scelta ci sarà chiarita: dar alle gambe oppure dar la vita


Explanation:
:)

Michael Korovkin
Italy
Local time: 18:01
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Native speaker of: Native in EnglishEnglish, Native in RussianRussian

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agree  Karin Anna Aisicovich
2 hrs
  -> grazie, Karin

neutral  Assiolo: "Dar alle gambe" vuol dire perseguitare o intralciare qualcuno. Per dire "fuggire" si dice "darsela a gambe" (il più usato), dare a gambe, darla a gambe. Quindi: darcela a gambe oppure dar la vita.
1 day 19 hrs
  -> hai perfettamente rag-ne. Infatti è freudiano: dicevo a un mio studente di dare alle gambe.. ed eccoci. Meglio, prò, dare a gambe perché dasela spezza il ritmo
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2 days 12 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5 peer agreement (net): +1
E poi, ahinoi, dovremo affrontare/La dura scelta: scappare o crepare.


Explanation:
Un tentativo di conservare il ritmo, la rima, lo stile e il significato.
E poi, ahinoi, dovremo affrontare
La dura scelta: scappare o crepare.

Qui 'scappare' è stilisticamente abbastanza neutro, mentre 'udirat'' è colorito. Non fa niente, compensiamo usando 'crepare' al posto del neutro 'morire'.



Assiolo
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Local time: 18:01
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Native speaker of: Native in BelarusianBelarusian, Native in RussianRussian
PRO pts in category: 43

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agree  Irena Pizzi
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15 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 3/5Answerer confidence 3/5
scappare o crepare


Explanation:
еще один вариант

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Note added at 3 giorni12 ore (2010-01-01 14:20:50 GMT)
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не знаю насколько это важно для вас, но если вы хотите сохранить ритмический рисунок, то обратите внимание, что у вас идет после выбирать лейма (Шенгели), те эмфатическая пауза. я бы ее ничем не заполняла. даю возможный вариант ci tocca poi decidere che fare// scappare o crepare.

solod
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174 days   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
e poi si dovrà scegliere: fuggire o morire.


Explanation:
Mi sembra una delle traduzioni più fedeli.

Luisella Denti
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