05:46 Jun 12, 2015 |
Spanish to English translations [PRO] Marketing - Telecom(munications) | |||||||
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To help deliver the much desired teamwork Explanation: Suggestion. |
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help achieve the much vaunted teamwork Explanation: I think "much vaunted" may be the notion the asker was aiming for with "coveted", which I perceive as a tad too negative (Thou shall not...). It means highly or widely praised or boasted about (hence, desired). Google "much vaunted teamwork" for 120+ results of use. |
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Help produce the much desired teamwork Explanation: I agree with neilmac that coveted is not the best choice since it can be associated with envy or negative desire (think codiciado). I like Ana's solution– I think the phrase "much desired" is much more accessible to the average reader than "vaunted," which itself has some negative connotations, in the sense of over-promoting something or boasting, and is less commonly used. In my view, produce + teamwork is a more common and natural-sounding collocation than deliver + teamwork. |
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contribute to /help to achieve that teamwork we so strongly desire Explanation: ... or "the teamwork..." |
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Help achieve the much desired teamwork Explanation: See discussion. |
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help to achieve the much desired team work Explanation: a lograr in Spanish means to achieve as is the action to achieve |
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