Glossary entry

Persian (Farsi) term or phrase:

فضا شفاف و آشکار باشد

English translation:

Should the space be clear and open?

Added to glossary by Farzad Akmali
Jan 1, 2009 17:17
15 yrs ago
Persian (Farsi) term

فضا شفاف و آشکار باشد

Persian (Farsi) to English Tech/Engineering Construction / Civil Engineering Urban Design
َAn item in a questionnaire, about Public Urban Spaces

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Could you please let me know about the tense of the sentence too?
Change log

Jan 7, 2009 07:25: Farzad Akmali Created KOG entry

Discussion

Edward Plaisance Jr Jan 2, 2009:
OK, I see. These are not questions. They are statements. We would say something like:

Indicate your agreement with the following statements by marking one of the 5 options.
1. The space should be open and clear. Strongly agree Agree No opinion...etc
Farzad Akmali (asker) Jan 1, 2009:
I am really sorry, The choices should be included in question but not in answers!

سؤال کاملا موافقم موافقم نظری ندارم مخالفم کاملا مخالفم
1 – فضا از سلامت روانی برخوردار باشد
2- گروه های مختلف سنی در آن فضا حضور یابند
3- رنگ، ظاهر و مصالح به کار رفته در فضا با محیط پیرامونی اش هماهنگ باشد
4- دوری و نزدیکی فضای عمومی شهری مهم نیست
5- فضای عمومی پاکیزه و به دور ازآلودگی های صوتی و آب و هوایی باشد
6- فضا قابل دفاع باشد ( جرم و جنایت کمی در فضا اتفاق بیافتد)
Saeid Hasani Jan 1, 2009:
pls post the whole question and choices as it is in source language
Edward Plaisance Jr Jan 1, 2009:
Without seeing the whole questionnaire, it is hard to say, but in my explanation below, I indicated that, in general, a well-designed questionnaire in English uses the "question stem" only once...the reader then only sees the options as answers
Farzad Akmali (asker) Jan 1, 2009:
Actually it seems that the choices should not be included in the question!
Edward Plaisance Jr Jan 1, 2009:
Since it is in a questionnaire I am assuming that it is basically asking a question...you could also phrase it like this: "Space be open and clear?"...in any case, in English, it would appropriate to make sure the reader sees it as a question.
Farzad Akmali (asker) Jan 1, 2009:
the source is not interrogative! should it be in question form?
as follows:

Should the space be clear and open?
a)strongly agree b) agree c) ......

Proposed translations

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Should the space be clear and open?

Without the full context it is hard to say. In general, this is the way you would ask it in a questionnaire.

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Note added at 14 mins (2009-01-01 17:32:31 GMT)
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In addition, normally in an English questionnaire you put the "stem" of the question first and do not repeat it each time...for example:
1. Should the space be...
a. abc and def
b. ghi and jkl
c. mno and pqr
etc.
Peer comment(s):

agree Ali Beikian
26 mins
thanks!
agree yam67
1 hr
thanks!
agree Sajjad Hamadani
10 hrs
thanks!
agree Mohammad Reza Razaghi
13 hrs
thanks!
agree Fereidoon Keyvani
14 hrs
thanks!
agree Afsaneh Pourjam
15 hrs
thanks!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks a lot Edward! clarification you provided is really of great help!"
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transparent and clear vicinity/surrounding/atmosphere

this answer is the case where the source is among the choices.
I think, in this case as there is no more context, imperative sentence and ... use of modal auxiliary verbs will help; you should provide more context or at least some of the other questions to know where we are standing.
vicinity should/must/shall be ...
it depends all on the questionnaire context as well as the choice of equivalence.
the tense used in questionnaire is usually simple present and use of many modifiers are typical to come to sorts of phrases/clauses ...

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Note added at 47 mins (2009-01-01 18:05:20 GMT) Post-grading
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you are welcome!

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Note added at 13 hrs (2009-01-02 06:59:48 GMT) Post-grading
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as I can see the questions now, you should use simple present tense and/or modal auxiliary verbs such as:

the vicinity should be transparent and clear.
the choices absolutely agree, agree, neutral, disagree, absolutely disagree
Note from asker:
Thanks a lot Saeid!
Peer comment(s):

agree Armineh Johannes : armineh johannes
2 hrs
Thank you Madam!
agree Ali Beikian
14 hrs
Thanks Pal!
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