Nov 29, 2007 19:40
16 yrs ago
Chinese汉语 term
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完善 - 调整完善
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Chinese汉语译成English英语
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政府/政治
This is my first attempt at tranlation, any help is greatly appreciated! Thanks.
财政部部长谢旭人在29日召开的全国完善农村义务教育经费保障机制工作会议上强调，要切实加大财政投入，进一步完善农村义务教育经费保障机制，把调整完善农村义务教育经费保障机制改革有关政策落到实处。
During a meeting on establishing a secure funding system for mandatory rural education on 11/29/07, Xie Xue Ren, Director of the Department of Finance emphasized the need for increased funding inputs, to further improve and complete the secured funding sources for the mandatory rural education system, and to ensure all policies regarding the reform to improve and complete the mandatory rural education system are being implemented.
财政部部长谢旭人在29日召开的全国完善农村义务教育经费保障机制工作会议上强调，要切实加大财政投入，进一步完善农村义务教育经费保障机制，把调整完善农村义务教育经费保障机制改革有关政策落到实处。
During a meeting on establishing a secure funding system for mandatory rural education on 11/29/07, Xie Xue Ren, Director of the Department of Finance emphasized the need for increased funding inputs, to further improve and complete the secured funding sources for the mandatory rural education system, and to ensure all policies regarding the reform to improve and complete the mandatory rural education system are being implemented.
Proposed translations
(English英语)
| 3 +1 | To complete [the listed items] and to improve [their quality] |
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| 4 | 完善: adjusted / 调整完善: adjust and improve |
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| 4 | improve - improved |
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Proposed translations
+1
5小时
To complete [the listed items] and to improve [their quality]
完 - To complete something. For example, 4 of 5 items have been done and 1 more needs to be done to complete a 5-item projece. 完 refers to quantity.
善 - To improve something. 善 refers to quality.
Together, 完 and 善 take care of both aspects of something: quantity and quality.
调整完善 is 调整 and 完善. 调整 is adjustment, meaning making some changes on, e.g., the preset goals, policies, and so on. If some preset marks were too low, 调整 will increase them.
善 - To improve something. 善 refers to quality.
Together, 完 and 善 take care of both aspects of something: quantity and quality.
调整完善 is 调整 and 完善. 调整 is adjustment, meaning making some changes on, e.g., the preset goals, policies, and so on. If some preset marks were too low, 调整 will increase them.
5小时
完善: adjusted / 调整完善: adjust and improve
这些都是官语。每x年一次的十x大政府工作报告的官方译文，是这类官语的标准参考：
〖16大报告〗：
优化军队的编成和结构,调整和完善政策制度。
The formation and structure of the army must be optimized and the related policies and systems should be adjusted and improved.
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Note added at 5 hrs (2007-11-30 01:21:57 GMT)
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完善: adjust
调整完善: adjust and improve
上面引用的译文来自16大报告的官方译本。
〖16大报告〗：
优化军队的编成和结构,调整和完善政策制度。
The formation and structure of the army must be optimized and the related policies and systems should be adjusted and improved.
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Note added at 5 hrs (2007-11-30 01:21:57 GMT)
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完善: adjust
调整完善: adjust and improve
上面引用的译文来自16大报告的官方译本。
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Kathy (Yuling) Chu
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improve - improved
Here's my version of this segment for your reference.
to further improve the secured funding sources for the mandatory rural education system, and to ensure that all policies regarding the reform of the improved mandatory rural education system are being implemented in a practical manner.
进一步完善农村义务教育经费保障机制，把调整完善农村义务教育经费保障机制改革有关政策落到实处。
to further improve the secured funding sources for the mandatory rural education system, and to ensure that all policies regarding the reform of the improved mandatory rural education system are being implemented in a practical manner.
进一步完善农村义务教育经费保障机制，把调整完善农村义务教育经费保障机制改革有关政策落到实处。
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