Sep 13, 2008 12:11
15 yrs ago
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Indonesian term

sebuah sangkar besi tidak bisa mengubah rajawali

Indonesian to English Other Poetry & Literature poetry
Sebuah sangkar besi
tidak bisa mengubah rajawali
menjadi seekor burung nuri

Rajawali adalah pacar langit
dan di dalam sangkar besi
rajawali merasa pasti
bahwa langit akan selalu menanti

Langit tanpa rajawali
adalah keluasan dan kebebasan tanpa sukma
tujuh langit, tujuh rajawali
tujuh cakrawala, tujuh pengembara

Rajawali terbang tinggi memasuki sepi
memandang dunia
rajawali di sangkar besi
duduk bertapa
mengolah hidupnya

Hidup adalah merjan-merjan kemungkinan
yang terjadi dari keringat matahari
tanpa kemantapan hati rajawali
mata kita hanya melihat matamorgana

Rajawali terbang tinggi
membela langit dengan setia
dan ia akan mematuk kedua mata siapa
wahai, kamu, yang tidak suka mengolah dunia
Change log

Sep 14, 2008 00:56: ivo abdman changed "Level" from "Non-PRO" to "PRO"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

PRO (3): Hendarto Setiadi, Ramona Ali, ivo abdman

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Discussion

tenkyuu (X) Sep 13, 2008:
Nice poem. Please log in as a registered member next time.

Proposed translations

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an iron cage won't change an eagle

an iron cage won't change an eagle into a parrot
Peer comment(s):

agree Eddie R. Notowidigdo
1 hr
agree Anthony Indra : Funny does not sounds as poetic in English... especially the parrot part;)
2 hrs
agree ivo abdman : Sepertinya ini puisi untuk motivator mlm ya mbak lady? Mungkin 15 hari lebih baru slesai smuanya kalo ditanyain satu2 :)
8 hrs
agree Archipelago (X) : ' ... can't turn an X into a Y ...". E,g, "You can't turn a carrot into a peach" > and "You Can't Turn a Hoe into a Housewife"
13 hrs
agree Ikram Mahyuddin
15 hrs
agree Suzan Piper : basically agree - 'won't' or 'can't' - burung nuri mungkin dipilih karena pertimbangan akhiran 'i' sama dg akhiran 'besi' di baris ke-1 jadi mungkin boleh pilih burung lain sep pigoen sbg alternatif - apa saja yg mirip bunyinya dg cage
15 hrs
a cage made of iron/won't change an eagle/into a pigeon?
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
11 hrs

an iron cage could not transform a kite

...into a parroquet

"tidak bisa" is "could not" and the rajawali is a kite.
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12 hrs

an iron cage incapable of altering an eagle into chicken

Mbak Lady, intinya sy stuju jawaban pak Hendarto, cuma sy usul nurinya diganti saja dgn ayam. Nuri itu khan tmasuk burung cerdas bisa niru suara disekitarnya dan masih bs terbang. Harusnya perubahan jadi tambah buruk bukan bgitu? Saya ada ide yg mungkin bs dipakah. Sebutir telur elang dierami oleh induk ayam dengan telur2 ayam lainnya. Sejak lahir ia diasuh bersama ayam2 lain tdk sadar bhw ia elang. Hingga pada suatu saat ia bisa terbang dan sadar kalau ia bukan ayam tapi elang. Begitulah manusia sbnnya ia bisa berubah / punya kemampuan lebih dr yg diketahuinya .. . Mudah2an membantu. Btw mo ikut lomba puisi
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