Glossary entry

English term or phrase:

manifest / protocol

Chinese translation:

体现/议定书

Added to glossary by Norman Li
Nov 16, 2008 07:25
15 yrs ago
English term

manifest / protocol

English to Chinese Bus/Financial Finance (general)
The success of high-profile China-Africa summits and bilateral relationships are manifesting in an entirely new protocol for foreign investment on the African Continent.

高调的中非峰会和双边关系的成功展示了外国在非洲大陆投资的一种全新协议。
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Nov 17, 2008 04:37: Norman Li Created KOG entry

Discussion

oceano (asker) Nov 17, 2008:
定稿 必须交稿了,最后译为:
高调的中非峰会的成功和双边关系在一份有关对非外国投资的全新议定书中得以昭示。
谢谢大家!
clearwater Nov 16, 2008:
请问楼主:原文是success还是successes?
clearwater Nov 16, 2008:
manifest可以作及物动词和不及物动词,但从本文manifesting后面的in来看,是不及物动词,而不是及物动词。所以不是“展示”,而是“在...中得到展示/体现”。
idaixom Nov 16, 2008:
展示,方案 似译为以下更贴切:中非高峰论坛的成功举办以及双边关系的良好发展,为非洲大陆的其他外国投资者展示了一种全新的方案。manifest 原意就是展示,显现,此处似乎没有太多引申的意思。protocol原意有礼仪,协议的意思,似与原文不是很贴切,作术语时有议定书,方案的意思,则译为方案更为贴切一些。
oceano (asker) Nov 16, 2008:
改译 高调的中非峰会和双边关系的成功在一项有关对非外国投资的全新议定书中得以昭示。
oceano (asker) Nov 16, 2008:
Not so sure Ibelieve it was a clerical error. “are" should be replaced by "is".
Norman Li Nov 16, 2008:
Agreed I agree with you, Shirley.
Shirley Lao Nov 16, 2008:
If the use of "are" here is accurate, then "the success of" should modify only "high-profile China-Africa summits" but not "bilateral relationships".

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体现/议定书

The success of high-profile China-Africa summits and bilateral relationships are manifesting in an entirely new protocol for foreign investment on the African Continent.
试译:引人注目的中非峰会和双边关系所取得的成功在一项有关非洲大陆外国投资的全新议定书中得以体现。


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Note added at 1 hr (2008-11-16 09:06:40 GMT)
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Sorry, 整句的试译有一处错误,主语应为the success+bilateral relationships,因为be动词用的复数形式,改译如下:
引人注目的中非峰会的成功举行和双边关系在一项有关非洲大陆外国投资的全新议定书中得以体现。
Peer comment(s):

agree clearwater : protocol:议定书或协议
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Thank you!
agree William He
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显示/议定书

The success of high-profile China-Africa summits and bilateral relationships are manifesting in an entirely new protocol for foreign investment on the African Continent.

中非峰会和双边关系的成功引人注目,通过全新的议定书昭示了外国在非洲大陆的投资。
Peer comment(s):

agree TRANS4CHINA
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neutral clearwater : foreign investment on the African Continent与 an entirely new protocol 搭配(请注意之间起衔接作用的for),而不是与 manifesting 搭配。
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全新格局

引人注目的中非峰会的成功举行和双边关系在外国在非洲大陆投资的全新格局中得以体现。



外国在非洲大陆投资的全新格局体现了引人注目的中非峰会的成功举行和双边关系。

(感觉portocol在这里可能是引申的抽象含义,而不是“协议书”。否则不会说entire new portocol。需要根据上下文判断是否有协议书?FYI)
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