Jul 6, 2009 13:11
14 yrs ago
Russian term

с любовью напряженка

Russian to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
I am translating an article published in Комсомольская правда - Белоруссия

And the title as follows:

Турция в кризис: с любовью напряженка

Any ideas for the part "с любовью напряженка" ?

Thanks in advance,

Discussion

Ali Bayraktar (asker) Jul 6, 2009:
It was a cross translation As there are not enough people in Russian-Turkish pair, all questions that asked by me in the pair Russian-English are for the purpose of getting idea in my native (Turkish) language.<br>So with your helps I have got an idea which can be translated into English as:<br>Crisis in Turkey: Decrease in Lovers<br>Was I wrong?
Alexandra Taggart Jul 6, 2009:
Если в Турции существует ....... To whom it may concern? Ladies or Gents? For latter, you may think, напряженка is a catastrophy,however, the psychiatrists say that the majority of men remain cool about absense of love in our ordinary life.I don't think that ladies would advertise their thirst, not in Turkey.Seems, these words are adressed to some particular, specific type of audience which are seeking love -shadow business of a casino?I my opinion, the translation should be in the language of economics as "crisis" has been put there already..
Sergei Tumanov Jul 6, 2009:
это сленг Раньше в газетах писали: "В такой-то области сложилась напряженная ситуация с чем-то (уборка урожая запаздывает изза плохой погоды; строительство электростанции не получается закончить в срок изза нехватки дефицитных деталей и т.д.).
В речи простых людей это "торжественное" выражение превратилось в простое "в стране напряженка с ...".,что другими словами означало " в стране НЕ ХВАТАЕТ..." хлеба, одежды, лекарств, грамотных кадров, опытных специалистов. Тут, фраза озанчает на хорошем русском литературном языке - "В Турции не хватает любви".
Vitali Stanisheuski Jul 6, 2009:
Синонимы Вот там есть рубрика: "На амурном фронте затишье", по смыслу - близко к выражению "с любовью напряженка".
Vitali Stanisheuski Jul 6, 2009:
Если Комсомольская правда... Если Комсомольская правда, то гулиться должно хорошо, вроде бы это та статья: http://kp.by/daily/24316.3/508695/
Ali Bayraktar (asker) Jul 6, 2009:
Впечатления автора о поездке в Турцию.
boostrer Jul 6, 2009:
Can you add some context? What is the article about?

Proposed translations

+3
44 mins
Selected

it's tough with/getting love (these days)

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Peer comment(s):

agree Victor Zagria : смею утверждать, модальность передана наиболее удачно
9 mins
mercì, Victor! I'm writing from experience!
agree Henry Schroeder : согласен с Виктором
15 mins
Thanks Henry.
agree Alexander Ryshow
47 mins
thaks Alexander
neutral gutbuster : это заголовок, он должен привлечь внимание краткостью и емкостью( в ущерб смыслу и грамматике, м.б.), но не растягиваться на полгазетной полосы.
1 hr
what's wrong with "it's tough with love" as zagolovok? Даже в рифму!
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
2 mins

shortages of love

Peer comment(s):

neutral gutbuster : это газетно-развязно-разговорный стиль, отнюдь не Love's Labour's Lost
1 hr
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+3
5 mins

Bad need for Love

Love's in short supply

Since it's a title of an article I have omitted an article deliberately.
Peer comment(s):

agree Viachaslau : a good variant for the headline. (Комсомольская правда - Белоруссия rockz the world) :-)
23 mins
neutral gutbuster : love badly needed?
1 hr
agree Dmitry Venyavkin
8 hrs
agree Alexei Shmouratko : Bad want for love
4 days
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+3
10 mins

the river of love does (doeth) NOT overflow

a bit of sarcasm, really.
Peer comment(s):

agree Mark Berelekhis : This is a tricky one, but your version works well.
24 mins
Thanks Mark!
agree sokolniki
2 hrs
Thanks!
agree svetlana cosquéric
4 hrs
Thanks!
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+2
35 mins

love deficit

word "напряженка" means " pressure". This pressure in pre-collapse Soviet era was the demand of the country's healthily growing population for basic products such as food or toilet paper which Soviet system could not provide in the required quantity/amounts.The result was a deficit in major food/products supply to the shop/stores.The whole situation was called "напряженка".
Peer comment(s):

agree Angela Greenfield : or "deficit of love"
35 mins
Yes, Thanks a lot! Some one has to be truly voracious ...
agree Alexander Ryshow
56 mins
Thank you!
disagree gutbuster : недостаточность, нехватка, дефицит любви - это не "напряженка", иначе автор написал бы - нехватка, недостаток и т.д.
1 hr
Agree.Don't think that I'm lazy, I've tried othe options.However, I do not know what is that in your head may play with this напряженка.
agree russki : read the article, "deficit of love" seems to fit best
14 hrs
Thanks!Honestly,I do not see much difference."deficit of love" puts "love" in the centre and "love deficit" hilights "deficit"-?
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1 hr

Luv is scarce

Попробовала передать немного разговорного и совкового реалитета с помощью смешанных регистров речи.
Peer comment(s):

neutral gutbuster : Pleasure of love lasts but a moment, Pain of love lasts a lifetime.
26 mins
)))
neutral Michael Korovkin : “совковый реалитет“! я кайфую, торчу, и у меня от этого выра едет крыша. Жаль нельзя здесь за него голосовать. Гатбастер же, по моему, перепутал с любовью оргазм и нередко следующие за таковым венерические заболевания...
5 hrs
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1 hr

hard up for love

hard up, Informal.
b. feeling a lack or need:
Peer comment(s):

agree DTSM
4 mins
благодарю, Дмитрий
disagree sokolniki : This variant has quite a physiological connotation and does not sound appropriate in this case where the meaning is lack/deficit/shortages of love.
1 hr
there's not enuff love, the author says so; only instead of using the nursery school word дефицит, нехватка, he prefers the word напряжёнка that is the third cousin of lack or deficit - hard up Informal In need; poor.
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2 hrs

Where's the Love?

Only because it's a subtitle
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2 hrs

hard time with love

hard time with love
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+1
4 hrs

love is hard to come by

Just another flavor of the same phrase.
Peer comment(s):

agree Rachel Douglas : I'd say this is the only one of the ten (so far) that "flows" as a subhead. I wonder what "impressions of a trip to Turkey" it's referring to, though!
1 hr
thanks for your support :)
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9 hrs

love is becoming a rare commodity

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