Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Spanish term or phrase:
comparativa al diagnóstico de salud
English translation:
comparative analysis of health
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alidalc
Aug 14, 2009 08:25
14 yrs ago
Spanish term
**comparativa al diagnóstico** de salud
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Hello, I am translating the abstract for a research paper and the title is "comparativa al diagnóstico de salud en España y Sudáfrica".
I just found the terminology a bit muddled because of the use of "comparativa" with "al" and then, of course, "diagnóstico" with "salud". I think, however, that the correct translation here is simply "A diagnostic comparison between health in Spain and South Africa".
Can anyone confirm this or offer a better suggestion?
The text of the abstract is not about diagnosis or anything technical, it just goes over the main causes of sickness in death in the two countries and touches on water supply, illiteracy and malnutrition.
Thank you for your help!
I just found the terminology a bit muddled because of the use of "comparativa" with "al" and then, of course, "diagnóstico" with "salud". I think, however, that the correct translation here is simply "A diagnostic comparison between health in Spain and South Africa".
Can anyone confirm this or offer a better suggestion?
The text of the abstract is not about diagnosis or anything technical, it just goes over the main causes of sickness in death in the two countries and touches on water supply, illiteracy and malnutrition.
Thank you for your help!
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comparative analysis of health issues in ...
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Thanks very much to all :))
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Thanks very much to all :))
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Roxanna Delgado
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Muchísimas gracias y saludos Roxanna :)
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Rita Tepper
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Muchísimas gracias Rita :)
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Rosa Paredes
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Muchísimas gracias rosa :)
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Comparison of Health in...
I think the title in Spanish is incorrect. As written, it would be "Comparison of Health diagnosis...".
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data on the WHO's European Health for All indicators and allows comparison of health in. Scotland with that in other European countries. eSCRIPS ...
www.isdscotland.org/isd/servlet/FileBuffer?namedFile=eHealt...
[PDF] BRITISH ASSOCIATION FOR BIOLOGICAL ANTHROPOLOGY AND ...File Format: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - View as HTML
comparison of health in early Medieval Germany and. England, Anglo-Saxon health, the use of Geographical. Information Systems to explore health in past ...
www.babao.org.uk/babao2003.pdf
Another possibility would be:
"Comparing Health in Spain and South America!
Getting a Balanced Perspective on Health and Safety in Spain: In order to ... can use to compare health and safety issues in Spain and the United States. ...
www.studentsabroad.com/spain/health.asp
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The reason my suggestions don't include "diagnosis" or "diagnostic" is precisely because you said the article doesn't talk about diagnosis at all.
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"Diagnostic comparison" refers to medical studies including diagnoses, such as the link below (and I don't even like that use). That's why I feel there's no need for "Diagnostic" or "Diagnosis" in English.
Diagnostic comparison of malaria infection in peripheral blood, placental blood and placental biopsies in Cameroonian parturient women ...
www.malariajournal.com/content/8/1/126
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File Format: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - View
data on the WHO's European Health for All indicators and allows comparison of health in. Scotland with that in other European countries. eSCRIPS ...
www.isdscotland.org/isd/servlet/FileBuffer?namedFile=eHealt...
[PDF] BRITISH ASSOCIATION FOR BIOLOGICAL ANTHROPOLOGY AND ...File Format: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - View as HTML
comparison of health in early Medieval Germany and. England, Anglo-Saxon health, the use of Geographical. Information Systems to explore health in past ...
www.babao.org.uk/babao2003.pdf
Another possibility would be:
"Comparing Health in Spain and South America!
Getting a Balanced Perspective on Health and Safety in Spain: In order to ... can use to compare health and safety issues in Spain and the United States. ...
www.studentsabroad.com/spain/health.asp
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Note added at 46 mins (2009-08-14 09:11:36 GMT)
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The reason my suggestions don't include "diagnosis" or "diagnostic" is precisely because you said the article doesn't talk about diagnosis at all.
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Note added at 49 mins (2009-08-14 09:14:43 GMT)
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"Diagnostic comparison" refers to medical studies including diagnoses, such as the link below (and I don't even like that use). That's why I feel there's no need for "Diagnostic" or "Diagnosis" in English.
Diagnostic comparison of malaria infection in peripheral blood, placental blood and placental biopsies in Cameroonian parturient women ...
www.malariajournal.com/content/8/1/126
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Comparison of Population Health Status between Esp & Sudáfr. / Esp-Sudáfr. Health Status Comparison
...Yes, I too do not think that here *diagnostic* makes sense other than *health status*... The title in Spanish is probably incomplete or incorrect.
See below:-
http://www.google.it/search?hl=it&q="" "comparison of popula...
...questionnaire on the health status comparison...
www.springerlink.com
...Considering ... health status comparison...
www.alcalc.oxfordjournals.org
Florida-US Health Status Comparison...
www.floridacharts.com
...comparison of population health status between Pandacan and Manila
www.shell.com
Comparison of Population Health Status...
www.journals.lww.com
http://www.google.it/search?hl=it&q="health status compariso...
Health status comparison between...
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov
See below:-
http://www.google.it/search?hl=it&q="" "comparison of popula...
...questionnaire on the health status comparison...
www.springerlink.com
...Considering ... health status comparison...
www.alcalc.oxfordjournals.org
Florida-US Health Status Comparison...
www.floridacharts.com
...comparison of population health status between Pandacan and Manila
www.shell.com
Comparison of Population Health Status...
www.journals.lww.com
http://www.google.it/search?hl=it&q="health status compariso...
Health status comparison between...
www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov
Example sentence:
Florida-US Health Status Comparison. Indicator. Data Year. Rate Type...
Comparison of Population Health Status in Six European Countries
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Comparing the state of public health in Spain and South Africa
"Public health" is a common term in English while also avoiding wordiness.
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