Jan 10, 2012 06:57
12 yrs ago
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German term
Austria
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Getränkeabholmarkt
German to English
Marketing
Marketing / Market Research
Zusätzlich zur Auslieferung hat die Brauerei XX auch einen Getränkeabholmarkt
im Messegelände Ost, vis-à-vis der Halle 8, mit Bier, Limonaden, Fruchtsäften, Pago und Mineralwasser eingerichtet
Apart from the delivery service the brewery XX has opened a cash & carry shop for beverages in the Exhibition Centre East opposite hall 8, which offers beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juices and mineral water.?
Vielen Dank!
im Messegelände Ost, vis-à-vis der Halle 8, mit Bier, Limonaden, Fruchtsäften, Pago und Mineralwasser eingerichtet
Apart from the delivery service the brewery XX has opened a cash & carry shop for beverages in the Exhibition Centre East opposite hall 8, which offers beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juices and mineral water.?
Vielen Dank!
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 +2 | Brewery shop |
David Williams
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| 4 | shop / store |
Birgit Gläser
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| 4 | Bottle shop |
Pauline Alexiou
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| 4 -1 | collect-your-own drinks store |
Sarah Bessioud
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| 3 -1 | self-service depot/market |
Ramey Rieger (X)
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Proposed translations
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David Williams
Germany
Germany
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Brewery shop
In this particular context you could say that the brewery has opened its own shop:
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at the Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Note added at 43 mins (2012-01-10 07:41:24 GMT)
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Delete "the":
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Note added at 9 days (2012-01-19 08:50:09 GMT) Post-grading
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Bitte schön, gern geschehen!
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at the Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Note added at 43 mins (2012-01-10 07:41:24 GMT)
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Delete "the":
"As well as its delivery service, the XX brewery has opened a shop at Exhibition Centre East, opposite hall 8, which sells beer, lemonades, fruit juices, Pago juice and mineral water."
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Note added at 9 days (2012-01-19 08:50:09 GMT) Post-grading
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Bitte schön, gern geschehen!
Peer comment(s):
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Nicola Wood
: agree with both this solution and your discussion entry.
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Thanks Nicola!
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Ramey Rieger (X)
: When the sentence is as you wrote it, as this isn't only a brewery shop, but the brewery has opened a shop.
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "vielen Dank!"
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18 mins
self-service depot/market
Your solution is just fine, Martina - here's an alternative
I don't think you need to repeat the "drinks" since it's obvious.
I don't think you need to repeat the "drinks" since it's obvious.
Peer comment(s):
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David Williams
: A cash & carry is something entirely different - a Großhandelmarkt like Metro!
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Okay, my mistake
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1 hr
Sarah Bessioud
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Germany
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Germany
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collect-your-own drinks store
I would use this in the context given. Although not an established term per se, this makes a nice contrast to the delivery service previously mentioned. Exhibitors can either have drinks delivered or collect their own.
"As well as their delivery service, Brewery XX has now opened a collect-your-own drinks store..... providing (or selling, NOT OFFERING) beer, lemonade, fruit juices etc."
"As well as their delivery service, Brewery XX has now opened a collect-your-own drinks store..... providing (or selling, NOT OFFERING) beer, lemonade, fruit juices etc."
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David Williams
: No, sorry, that just doesn't sound English. Also, "selling" or "which sells", not "providing".
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shop / store
Ich würde es einfach und neutral halten, insbesondere da wahrscheinlich mehr Wasser als Bier verkauft wird...
Vielleicht "outlet shop"
Außerdem würde ich sagen "the brewery is operating a shop" anstelle "opened", da es wohl weniger eine Geschäftseröffnung ist, sondern nur für die Messe betrieben wird.
Vielleicht "outlet shop"
Außerdem würde ich sagen "the brewery is operating a shop" anstelle "opened", da es wohl weniger eine Geschäftseröffnung ist, sondern nur für die Messe betrieben wird.
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Pauline Alexiou
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Bottle shop
The brewery also operates a bottle shop within the fairgrounds, where an assortment of beers and soft drinks are available.
Example sentence:
The brewery operates a bottle shop where an assortment of beers and soft drinks are sold.
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