Glossary entry

Spanish term or phrase:

un primer ensayo de lo que será

English translation:

first inklings of the Revolution

Added to glossary by anivlis
Jul 4, 2018 16:50
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Spanish term

un primer ensayo de lo que será

Spanish to English Art/Literary Social Science, Sociology, Ethics, etc. Esempi: microbiologia, et
The sentence appears in an article written in Latin American Spanish. The English version will be read by the general public in various English speaking countries.


The sentence where the term occurs goes: Los sucesos de comienzos de julio de 1789 se transforman en "un primer ensayo de lo que será" la Revolución en Lyon.

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Discussion

Domini Lucas Jul 4, 2018:
re "rehearsal" To me the word 'rehearsal' presupposes 'intention' i.e. that the 'rehearsal' itself is intended to be a rehearsal for a subsequent event (as a play rehearsal is for a performance). Though 'ensayo' can mean that, I am just wondering whether those involved would have intended it that way. I think that the text views the 'ensayo' that way purely with hindsight. If I read 'rehearsal' in English without the Spanish, I would assume that those involved had planned a trial run for an event that was due to happen at a later date. I can't see that in the Spanish due to 'transforman'. Whereas 'attempt' suggests that the 'trial run' might have been intended to succeed, but didn't. Or, even, that those involved had no specific plan during the early July events - depending on the wider context. This would seem to reflect the original meaning more closely. Just a thought to throw into the mix.

(By the way, I think trial run is too modern for the context so am not posting it as an option!)

Proposed translations

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first inklings of the Revolution

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Example sentence:

From the very first inklings of the republic, America was part of something bigger than itself.

the first inklings of the coming recession emerged as a housing bubble fueled by scant regulation

Note from asker:
Great idea! Thanks a million Joss
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the first attempt of what was to be...

...the Revolution of Lyon.
Peer comment(s):

agree ormiston : I'd prefer ' the first attempt AT what was to be(come)
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You're right, Ormiston, attempt at... Thank you!
agree Domini Lucas : I also agree with ormiston
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Thank you, Domini.
agree Muriel Vasconcellos : Agree with ormiston
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Absolutely. Thanks, Muriel.
agree Phoenix III : I agree with ormiston
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Thank you, Phoenix.
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an initial rehearsal of

My interpretation.
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a first starting point of what is going to evolve

that´s my interpretation(; or of what is likely to evolve (next or in the near future)
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a first rehearsal of what would be


The events at the beginning of July 1789 became a first rehearsal of what would be the Revolution in Lyon.

http://www.wordreference.com/es/en/translation.asp?spen=ensa...
Spanish English
ensayo nm (prueba) test, trial n

ensayo nm rehearsal n


https://es.oxforddictionaries.com/translate/spanish-english/...
ensayo
rehearsal, n.

(de un espectáculo)
rehearsal

(prueba) trial
(prueba) test
(intento) attempt


http://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/ks3/history/uk_through_time/po...
In 1789, money problems forced the king to call the 'Estates General' - a kind of parliament. He wanted to raise taxes.

The Estates did not give him more money, but instead presented thousands of lists of complaints, known as 'cahiers'.

When the king tried to close down the Estates, the members took the 'Tennis Court Oath' on 20 June 1789. They declared themselves to be the 'National Assembly' and promised to keep meeting until the government was reformed and a new constitution was drawn up.

They were supported by the mob, which stormed the Bastille prison on 14 July 1789.

The National Assembly adopted the Rights of Man, which states that: "Men are born free and remain free and equal in rights". They also abolished feudal rules and set up a parliament, called the 'the Convention' similar to Britain's.


http://www.canyonspringshighschool.org/ourpages/auto/2015/11...
Fall of the Bastille
n the morning of July 14, 1789, a Parisian mob of some
eight thousand men and women in search of weapons
streamed toward the Bastille, a royal armory filled with arms
and ammunition. The Bastille was also a state prison.
Although it contained only seven prisoners at the time, in the
eyes of those angry Parisians it was a glaring symbol of the
government’s harsh policies. The armory was defended by
the Marquis de Launay and a small garrison of 114 men.


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Background to the Revolution
The year 1789 witnessed two far-reaching events: the beginning of a new
United States of America and the beginning of the French Revolution. Compared
with the American Revolution, the French Revolution was more complex, more
violent, and far more radical. It tried to create both a new political order and a new
social order. Indeed, it has often been seen as a major
turning point in European political and social history.
The causes of the French Revolution include both
long-range problems and immediate forces. The
long-range causes are to be found in the condition of
French society. Before the revolution, French society
was based on inequality. France’s population of 27
million was divided, as it had been since the Middle
Ages, into three orders, or estates.


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Some other options:

preview/taste of things to come/a predictor of things to come/a watershed event. I particularly like "watershed event".

French Revolution | Causes and Timeline | HISTORY.com
www.history.com/topics/french-revolution
The French Revolution began in 1789 and ended in 1799 with the rise of Napoleon Bonaparte. ... Get the facts on HISTORY.com. ... The French Revolution was a **watershed event** in modern European history that began in 1789 and ended in the late 1790s with the ascent of Napoleon Bonaparte.
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first phase of what was to become

This is less accurate than attempt, but submitting it as an idea to consider. Given that it is being viewed in retrospect.
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