Dec 21, 2022 04:55
1 yr ago
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Spanish term
Costa Rica
Native in: Spanish 
fractura de sonido
Spanish to English
Art/Literary
Poetry & Literature
Buenas noches,
Ustedes podrían, por favor, ayudarme a traducir "fractura de sonido" en la siguiente oración?
Oración: "Le grito al público que qué pasaba con una voz que le salía del alma, una fractura de sonido pegajoso".
Contexto: esta oración se encuentra en un cuento que trata sobre un escritor de poemas y aquí se encuentra presentando una de sus obras a un público, pero estos no le estaban poniendo mucha atención.
Muchas gracias
Ustedes podrían, por favor, ayudarme a traducir "fractura de sonido" en la siguiente oración?
Oración: "Le grito al público que qué pasaba con una voz que le salía del alma, una fractura de sonido pegajoso".
Contexto: esta oración se encuentra en un cuento que trata sobre un escritor de poemas y aquí se encuentra presentando una de sus obras a un público, pero estos no le estaban poniendo mucha atención.
Muchas gracias
Proposed translations
(English)
| 3 | (like a thwarted) thunderclap |
Andrew Bramhall
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| 3 +1 | A stuttering cry |
ormiston
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| 2 | a cry caught in his throat |
William Hepner
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| 2 | a broken and sticky-sounding |
O G V
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Proposed translations
6 hrs
Andrew Bramhall
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
Flair and accuracy tailored to your text
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, German to English
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70
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(like a thwarted) thunderclap
"He shouted to the audience what was wrong with a voice that came from his soul, a fracture of sticky sound (that broke from his throiat like a stunted thunderclap)
You just have to be creative here, dictionary definitions just don't work here!
You just have to be creative here, dictionary definitions just don't work here!
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you!"
52 mins
William Hepner
United States
United States
Native in English
Specializes in field
United States
Marketing and Communications
Native in: English (Variant: US) 
Works in: Spanish to English
Related KudoZ points
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16
a cry caught in his throat
A cry seems like a possibility for "fractura de sonido" and the adjective "pegajoso", which in this context probably isn't referring to the catchiness of a tune or song, still carries some of the catchy/sticky connotation in this translation.
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Note added at 54 mins (2022-12-21 05:50:25 GMT)
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A relevant definition of cry: "an inarticulate utterance of distress, rage, or pain"
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/cry
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Note added at 54 mins (2022-12-21 05:50:25 GMT)
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A relevant definition of cry: "an inarticulate utterance of distress, rage, or pain"
https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/cry
2 hrs
Spanish term (edited):
una fractura de sonido pegajoso
a broken and sticky-sounding
reelaborando en términos más frecuentes:
con una voz rota y de sonido pegajoso que le salía del alma
with a broken and sticky-sounding voice that came out of his broken soul
con una voz rota y de sonido pegajoso que le salía del alma
with a broken and sticky-sounding voice that came out of his broken soul
+1
8 hrs
A stuttering cry
Podría comunicator el sonido
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