Catalan to English Social Sciences Social Science, Sociology, Ethics, etc.

This is a text on the association movement of Catalonia and Latin Europe also on mutualism and cooperativism. Right now I've got "factory welfare". Not happy with my first draft at all. Any suggestions welcome.
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ORIG
Per Robert Castel, aquestes temptatives reformadores, que volen afrontar el pauperisme i millorar les condicions de la vida obrera, a França, van de Fédéric Ozanam a Armand de Melun tot passant per Gérando i Villeneuve Bargémont.
Omplen de contingut una economia social de matriu catòlica que critica la caritat tradicional i proposa la creació de caixes d’estalvi i entitats de crèdit popular que introdueixen la previsió, la millora de l’habitatge obrer que el fixa territorialment, ***la tutela fabril*** amb economats, dispensaris, escoles de formació professional, alguns subsidis, camps d’esports i que pot fins i tot ésser favorable a les societats de socors mutus, mentre no es transformin en societats de resistència.

ROUGH DRAFT
For Robert Castel, these reformist attempts to tackle pauperism and improve working-class living conditions in France ranged from Fédéric Ozanam to Armand de Melun via Gérando and Villeneuve Bargémont.
They give content to a social economy with Catholic roots that is critical of traditional charity, proposing the establishment of savings banks and popular credit institutions to provide social welfare, to improve the housing of workers on a regional basis, to offer ***factory welfare*** and commissaries, dispensaries, occupational training schools, some subsidies, and sporting grounds. This could even be positive for mutual benefit societies as long as they do not transform themselves into resistance societies.