should be more focused and effective as a result.

Chinese translation: 因此会更有针对性和(更)有效

14:56 Sep 6, 2013
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Tech/Engineering - Engineering (general) / general
English term or phrase: should be more focused and effective as a result.
The company can obtain some idea of the overall demand for training in the future, and in which particular areas it is required.
The resulting training programmes should be more focused and effective as a result.

请问这里的more focused and effective as a result.
应如何理解?
Sheldon Fu
China
Local time: 09:16
Chinese translation:因此会更有针对性和(更)有效
Explanation:
more focused 是修饰‘培训课程“ 经过上文的 “...obtain some idea...”后会“更有针对性“

as a result 在此句译成: 因此...... 比较通顺.
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Lawrence Zhang
Canada
Local time: 21:16
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Summary of answers provided
5 +1應該會更加集中和有效
Lincoln Hui
4 +2因此会更有针对性和(更)有效
Lawrence Zhang


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38 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 5/5 peer agreement (net): +1
應該會更加集中和有效


Explanation:
直譯沒問題吧。Effective 某意義上確實可以理解成 focused 的結果。

Lincoln Hui
Hong Kong
Local time: 09:16
Native speaker of: Native in ChineseChinese, Native in EnglishEnglish
PRO pts in category: 8

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Min Xuanping: 翻译成“應該會更加集中而有效”会更好一些,“而(whereas)”体现了as a result
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5 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
因此会更有针对性和(更)有效


Explanation:
more focused 是修饰‘培训课程“ 经过上文的 “...obtain some idea...”后会“更有针对性“

as a result 在此句译成: 因此...... 比较通顺.

Lawrence Zhang
Canada
Local time: 21:16
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Native speaker of: Chinese
PRO pts in category: 12

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agree  clearwater
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agree  Shepherdyu
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