i want to conceive, this having a fluid seen in posterior cul de sac is a proble

English translation: correcting the English

09:55 Jun 7, 2006
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Medical - Medical: Health Care / medical
English term or phrase: i want to conceive, this having a fluid seen in posterior cul de sac is a proble
i want to conceive, but my ultrasound says that fluid is seen in my posterior cul de sac. is this be a problem...please
ellyn
Selected answer:correcting the English
Explanation:
Do you just want the English corrected? I would say:
I want to conceive, but my ultrasound indicates that fluid is present in my posterior cul-de-sac. Is this a problem?

(I am not a medical expert, so I cannot offer any opinion on it from that point of view)
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Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 06:11
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3 +3correcting the English
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correcting the English


Explanation:
Do you just want the English corrected? I would say:
I want to conceive, but my ultrasound indicates that fluid is present in my posterior cul-de-sac. Is this a problem?

(I am not a medical expert, so I cannot offer any opinion on it from that point of view)

Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
Local time: 06:11
Native speaker of: English
PRO pts in category: 24
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Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Richard Benham: What's a "cul-de-sac" in this context?
6 hrs
  -> Well, if Ellyn is French, I suspect it means rectum. But as I said, I am not a medical expert.

agree  Will Matter: Our esteemed colleague, Mr. Barnett, IS a doctor and his advice is very good. If a rewrite is what she wants, your version is perfectly acceptable.
7 hrs
  -> Thank you.

agree  Alfa Trans (X)
1 day 2 hrs
  -> Thank you.
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