Mar 6, 2019 10:25
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English term

horlock

English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
‘You might want to think again, sir,’ he said. ‘Boris took a couple of fingers off a man last year. He’s a trampler, too, and a snaffler and a scraper and he’ll *horlock* if he can get away with it. He’s got demons in him, and that’s a fact.’
--quoted from Going Postal (2004, fantasy fiction) by Terry Pratchett (link: https://zingnovel.com/going-postal-discworld-33-page-26.html...

The boss of the stable took Boris, a "killer" horse, to retaliate against Moris, who had disparaged his horses.
Cannot figure out what "horlock" means.
Thank you!

Discussion

philgoddard Mar 6, 2019:
We've had a lot of questions from this asker about Terry Pratchett, and I think sometimes we treat these largely nonsense words with too much seriousness. Pratchett would be having a quiet chuckle if he were reading this discussion.
It can be useful for a non-native speaker to know if the words have connotations that might help to shed light on their approximate meaning. But I think in this case there are none. Horlock obviously means something bad, but I think that's all we can say about it. The asker should simply make up a word in Chinese.
Sarah Lewis-Morgan Mar 6, 2019:
As does Adora Belle!!
Yvonne Gallagher Mar 6, 2019:
Sarah, Yes, I believe I already said all that? But he could be described as impressive, instilling fear into all. A real badass. And certainly fast. And Moist manages to hang on...
Sarah Lewis-Morgan Mar 6, 2019:
Yvonne As I mentioned below, I am a big Pratchett fan. And believe me, the meaning of killer in this case is certainly not great or awesome. Boris is definitely a horse to be reckoned with, and his first action when he is released is to gallop off as fast as possible.
Yvonne Gallagher Mar 6, 2019:
Killer horse

doesn't necessarily mean that it kills. Yes, it is a big strong horse, doesn't want riders, doesan't want to be in a stable but wants to run free. So, it might throw someone off its back, or knock them down and trample them in its bid to get free but that doesn't equate to planned killing!
Also note that "killer" is slang for impressive, awesome, a winner, a knockout or great. https://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=killer
Sarah Lewis-Morgan Mar 6, 2019:
Boris is indeed described as a killer horse, but I'm not sure that this is the correct word in this case. As I said I think the OP would be quite right to use his own imagination and even possibly invent his own word or use the "English" one, as it were.
Sina Salehi Mar 6, 2019:
What about "kill" ?
Sarah Lewis-Morgan Mar 6, 2019:
In reply to the comment below... … made by the suggester. In none of his books does Pratchett ever say that an animal has murdered a person, which is the basis for my doubt. Murder is in general used for a human being killing another human being.
Sarah Lewis-Morgan Mar 6, 2019:
Very definitely made up As both a Pratchett fan and a horse owner I can confirm that this is not a real word. You can probably just use your own imagination about this word. But I don't think I would use the word murder as is suggested below, as murder is not something you can really ascribe to a horse.
updownK (asker) Mar 6, 2019:
Correction Sorry, in my question, "Moris" should be "Moist".
@ Tony M, yes, but no idea where this word comes from.
Tony M Mar 6, 2019:
@ Asker Knowing TP, very likely to be a made-up word.

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The easiest thing is to take "killer horse" at face value and say "horlock" means "kill" but I think that is far too simplistic and does not explore WHY Pratchett uses this (made-up) word.

So, better to explore possible origins and meanings for the word so you can perhaps invent a similar one when translating. I read the rest of the incident with the horse to get a better understanding.

The first word that springs to mind when I see "horlock" is "horlicks" the nourishing drink, which used to be given to children at nighttime to help them sleep, although it was also seen as an energy booster for athletes, explorers, the aged and infirm!

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horlicks

Thus, you could say this is a horse full of energy and fast (which it quite obviously is as it takes 4 men to hold him) and there was a very fast race horse called just that Horlicks
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horlicks_(horse)

"Horlicks (1983 – 24 August 2011) was an outstanding Thoroughbred racemare from New Zealand...." She won a lot of races!


The family name Horlicks gives a clue as to where the grey mare got her name

https://www.houseofnames.com/horlock-family-crest

The Horlo(i)ck surname comes from the Old English words "har," meaning "grey" and "locc," which refers to a lock of hair. Thus the surname was most likely formed from a nickname for someone with a patch of grey hair.

And the word "horlicks" is also used as a substitute for the profanity "bollocks".
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horlicks
"This substitution in the form of a singular noun is also used to refer to a minor disaster or shambles, as in "to make a complete horlicks of something". For example in July 2003 British Foreign Secretary Jack Straw described irregularities in the preparation and provenance of a dossier regarding weapons of mass destruction in Iraq as "a complete horlicks"...

So, what does "horlock" mean here?
It can mean trample, or kill, or bolt (run away fast)
(Moist) "Will he run?’
Hobson) ‘Not so much run as bolt, sir...

"A mysterious stranger Hobson had tried Boris as a racehorse and he would have been a very good one were it not for his unbreakable habit, at the off, of attacking the horse next to him and jumping the railings at the first bend.”


or "bollocks" meaning (to put it politely) injure someone's manhood (genitals) as Hobson asks Moist ‘Had all the kids you want, have yer?’ when Moist asks for the saddle to be taken off so he can ride bareback.

When Moist is holding on as the horse bolts away it says "Carefully, he eased more of the blanket under him. Various organs were going numb..."

It's a fast horse, doesn't want riders (though Moist manges to hang on)
"Boris...wasn’t too bad a ride. He’d hit his rhythm, a natural single-footed gait, and his burning eyes were focused on the blueness. His hatred of everything was for the moment subsumed in the sheer joy of space. ..at least he was headed in the right direction, which was away from his stable. Boris didn’t want to spend the days kicking the bricks out of his wall while waiting to throw the next bumptious idiot. He wanted to bite the horizon. He wanted to run. .."

Hope all this helps you come up with an idea for transltion



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Note added at 3 hrs (2019-03-06 14:03:30 GMT)
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OOPS sorry! I meant to close off the BOLD


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Note added at 5 days (2019-03-11 10:54:41 GMT) Post-grading
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Glad to have helped
Note from asker:
Thank you for your detailed research! It's definitely helpful, but I need time to read it carefully as well as the context.
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Commit murder

As the demonic characteristics are being one by one mentioned to describe Boris, I guess this last one must be the worst of all- commiting murder.

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Note added at 1 hr (2019-03-06 12:07:55 GMT)
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You can instead use "kill" maybe since "murder" needs planning and it is more used in legal cases actually.
Note from asker:
Thank you! I know what you mean. It's reasonable.
Peer comment(s):

neutral Sarah Lewis-Morgan : I would never say that an animal would "murder" a person.
1 hr
Come on Sarah! This is the world of literature and imagination. Anything is possible when it comes to the world of imagination.
disagree Yvonne Gallagher : a horse doesn't murder//yes, it might kill. But "murder" is the wrong word and not because of "legal cases" either. As Sarah said, we don't use the word with animals.
2 hrs
This is a "killer horse." Maybe not "murder" but it can certainly "kill."
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3 hrs

horse witchery

While it is almost certainly an invented word, I'm sure that Pratchett was playing on the word "warlock" (a male witch) and horsifying it.

I imagine that no reference to Horlicks (a malted milk beverage given to kids at bedtime) was intended, unless it was to evoke nightmares.
Note from asker:
Thank you! Good guess!
Peer comment(s):

neutral Yvonne Gallagher : yes, I did think of that possibility of stemming from "warlock" as well but couldn't see how it would fit into the text here.//yes, but it's "demons" in the sense of madness, not in the sense of witchcraft
15 mins
It goes on to mention "demons" and I think that links in with warlock. However, I think it's more of an allusion, not to be interpreted too strictly.
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