Glossary entry

Italian term or phrase:

in un lavoro di amalgama

English translation:

in the task of piecing together

Added to glossary by Lara Barnett
Feb 5, 2019 12:39
5 yrs ago
Italian term

in un lavoro di amalgama

Italian to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature Biography
This is the opening to an excerpt I have been given to translate. I have asked the client for more background to this but he has nothing he can give me.

"Speravo che la dolcezza dell’Asia mi aiutasse in un lavoro di amalgama per cercare di ricucire I vari frammenti che mi sono rimasti della vita di mio padre Stefano. "
(The next paragraph/sentence goes on to describe the evens of his father's death).

i have not used "amalgam" as I have only ever seen it used, even as a figure of speech, with at least two or more objects, never in this way. Would there be a good way to use this literal translation? Or is there a better option? My attempt is:

"I had hoped that the charm of Asia would be of some help to me in my (mixed up?) (diversified?) attempts at piecing together the various fragments, still within my grasp, of my father, Stefano's, life."
Proposed translations (English)
4 +3 in the process of amalgamating
Change log

Feb 6, 2019 13:12: Lara Barnett changed "Edited KOG entry" from "<a href="/profile/1213228">Lara Barnett's</a> old entry - "in un lavoro di amalgama"" to ""in the process of amalgamating""

Proposed translations

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in the process of amalgamating

Amalgamation doesn't just refer to objects - it can also be about ideas or, in this case, the fragments of the story.
I would shorten this very wordy sentence, since "amalgamare" and "ricucire" basically mean the same thing. You could leave either of them out.
Peer comment(s):

agree polyglot45 : "in the task of piecing together" would suffice
21 mins
I agree.
agree Fiona Grace Peterson : Agree with polyglot... "in the task of piecing together"
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agree Michele Fauble : Agree with polyglot45 and Fiona
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