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Jun 17, 2012 14:52
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French term

En amont des Systèmes Energétiques Intelligents

Non-PRO French to English Tech/Engineering Energy / Power Generation Smart Grid
Here I just want to confirm if "En amont " means upstream in this context?

Here is the complete sentence> En amont des Systèmes Energétiques Intelligents, se situent les centrales de production, historiquement basées sur des moyens de production centralisés conventionnels - charbon, gaz nucléaire et hydro-électrique - et évoluant progressivement vers des moyens de production renouvelables décentralisés :

Upstream of the Intelligent Energy Systems........

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Proposed translations

11 mins

upstream of the smart energy systems

Yes, common terminology. Prefer smart to intelligent and this phrase gets a lots more ghits.

http://gimelec.fr/images/gimelec/publication_correct_pdf/Liv...
Upstream of the smart energy systems are the generation plants,
historically based on conventional centralised generation facilities –
coal, gas, nuclear and hydroelectric power – gradually evolving toward
decentralised renewable power generation facilities: wind power,
solar heating and photovoltaic power, geothermal power, tidal power
and fuel cells.

Looks like a translation of your text!

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Note added at 15 mins (2012-06-17 15:07:24 GMT)
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French version if you want to check: http://www.smartgrids-cre.fr/media/documents/1103_Gimelec_Li...
Peer comment(s):

neutral cc in nyc : Have doubts about the English text in general, as it begins "The objective of the White Paper is to promote the French electrical industry expertise and the already available offer [sic] ..." (page 3) // not sure upstream conveys preexisting (oos)
55 mins
I didn't read the report (up to asker to decide whether it's any good for his purposes - or alert the client that a translation exists already!), but I don't see any problem with this particular phrase - upstream implying 'before' in both time and space.
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French term (edited): en amont des systèmes énergétiques intelligents

before smart energy systems

IMO, the meaning here is temporal rather than spatial – admittedly somewhat unorthodox.

The smart energy systems are yet to be built – thus this white paper proposing them.
Peer comment(s):

agree kashew : Indeed (or construct it with "preceding/prior to"). Simple language, instead of buzz.
17 hrs
Thank you. (IMO, the white paper is full of buzz.)
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2 hrs

Input of smart energy systems

Imho
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18 hrs

Prior to smart-energy systems

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