Jul 8, 2015 06:14
8 yrs ago
English term

so ...........

Non-PRO English to French Other General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters English conjunction, used in a legal doc
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Jul 8, 2015 08:44: writeaway changed "Field" from "Law/Patents" to "Other" , "Field (specific)" from "Law (general)" to "General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters" , "Field (write-in)" from "(none)" to "English conjunction, used in a legal doc"

Jul 8, 2015 09:37: GILLES MEUNIER changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

Non-PRO (3): Tony M, mchd, GILLES MEUNIER

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Discussion

Platary (X) Jul 8, 2015:
Bonjour J'éviterais ici le "donc" : ... seront publiés sur ce site et vous souhaiterez sans doute vérifier (suivre) les mises à jour.

Proposed translations

+4
2 hrs
Selected

et si vous voulez, vous pouvez......

Ok, this is NOT my native language and I never translate into French. But I agree with Adrien that "et" is the best way to go in Fr. I suggest getting away from all the stylistic niceties (including verb tenses) of the English. Make the Fr straight-forward and use present tense.
As I said, this is just my opinion as someone on the outside looking in....
Peer comment(s):

agree GILLES MEUNIER : et si vous voulez, vous pouvez rechercher les mises à jour
6 mins
agree Tony M : And I actually think this structure would fit nicely using 'ainsi' instead.
23 mins
agree Platary (X) : Merci pour le commentaire et j'approuve ta proposition :))
1 hr
agree Jean-Claude Gouin : J'espère que tous ces 'accords' augmenteront votre estime afin que vous puissiez traduire en français aussi ...
5 hrs
neutral patrickfor : c'est correct mais un peu "détendu" pour un truc pro... ""ainsi vous pourrez vous tenir informé des mises à jour" est plus rassurant non ?
7 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Selected automatically based on peer agreement."
3 mins

; il peut donc être intéressant

de vérifier s'ils n'ont pas été mis à jour
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+2
1 hr

ainsi / alors

I think a more natural FR construction might get away from the 'so' aspect — I've seen 'ainsi' used a lot in this sort of way, with its sense of 'thus' (which is after all the meaning 'so' has here); or failing that, I'd have thought 'alors' might have been a more appropriate choice.

I have also often seen the future tense used to convey the notion of 'may', although that might sit awkwardly here as it involves 'to wish to...'; either way, I think a more FR formulation wouold be preferable, rather than sticking too close to the EN structure.
Peer comment(s):

agree patrickfor : agree"ainsi vous pourrez vous tenir informé des mises à jour" looks more pro than "si vous voulez vous pourrez"
9 hrs
Merci, Patrick !
agree B D Finch
1 day 4 hrs
Thanks, B! :-)
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