Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Feb 26, 2015 09:19
9 yrs ago
French term
rechercher
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French to English
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Music
music review Mendelssohn
Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de « l’Allegro appassionato » du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.Contrastant avec ce premier thème passionnel récurrent, le deuxième thème annoncera bientôt une sérénité encore élevée avec l'arrivée du troisième thème, majestueux.
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 | reclaim |
kashew
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| 3 | recaptures |
Verginia Ophof
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References
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writeaway
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Change log
Mar 9, 2015 10:47: kashew Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
6 hrs
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reclaim
reclaims the listener - who had been taken off, so to speak!?
(...ce troisième mouvement promène l'auditeur d'une course joyeuse à une danse gracieuse ornée de trilles. Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de l'Allegro appassionato du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.)
(...ce troisième mouvement promène l'auditeur d'une course joyeuse à une danse gracieuse ornée de trilles. Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de l'Allegro appassionato du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.)
Peer comment(s):
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writeaway
: After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato draws in the listener with its surging melody based on the leap of a ninth. I think the original English translation is fine.
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I thought I'd give my take ;-)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "merci!"
4 hrs
Verginia Ophof
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recaptures
After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato recaptures the listener........
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Note added at 6 hrs (2015-02-26 16:05:00 GMT)
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This is how I see it:
as the listeners has previously been lulled, the finale's Allegro recaptures his full attention
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Note added at 6 hrs (2015-02-26 16:05:00 GMT)
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This is how I see it:
as the listeners has previously been lulled, the finale's Allegro recaptures his full attention
Peer comment(s):
| neutral |
writeaway
: I really don't think they are referring to a (re)captured audience/listener. /I don't think that listeners get bored or stop paying attention listening to Mendelssohn. It's more about their emotions and involvement.
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thank you writeaway, see my above added note
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Reference comments
1 hr
Reference:
For example
Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de l'Allegro appassionato du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.
After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato draws in the listener with its surging melody based on the leap of a ninth.
http://www.analekta.com/album/?gryphon-trio-mendelssohn-lalo...
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Note added at 6 hrs (2015-02-26 16:02:11 GMT)
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To make it clearer:
Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de l'Allegro appassionato du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.
After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato draws in the listener with its surging melody based on the leap of a ninth.
After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato draws in the listener with its surging melody based on the leap of a ninth.
http://www.analekta.com/album/?gryphon-trio-mendelssohn-lalo...
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Note added at 6 hrs (2015-02-26 16:02:11 GMT)
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To make it clearer:
Après un bref répit, le langoureux violoncelle de l'Allegro appassionato du Finale viendra rechercher l'auditeur avec l'élan d'une mélodie projetée sur un saut de neuvième.
After a brief respite, the languid cello of the finale's Allegro appassionato draws in the listener with its surging melody based on the leap of a ninth.
Peer comments on this reference comment:
| agree |
MSI Translat (X)
18 mins
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| agree |
Ben Lenthall
: The notion that you stop listening and then start again is cearly not right. Drawing you in again is ideal.
1 day 2 hrs
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I think it's a very good translation. No need to change it imo
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