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10:17 Apr 19, 2013 |
French to English translations [PRO] Tech/Engineering - Telecom(munications) | |||||||
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| Selected response from: Daryo United Kingdom Local time: 01:31 | ||||||
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3 +2 | data transactions |
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4 +1 | smartphone data transfers |
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data transactions Explanation: Although data may be "consumed" by devices, it is rarely described as such in EN. Rather it is "processed" or "exchanged" during each transaction. I would rephrase the sentence as "70% of data transactions are via Smartphones", or something similar. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 hr (2013-04-19 12:16:11 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- or perhaps "... with Smartphones (being) responsible for 70% of data traffic..." |
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